Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方。建议注意动词时态和句子结构，使表达更流畅自然。例如，使用"I always chat"而不是"I always chatting"，并且避免重复表达。

例: Yes, I always chat with my friends, whether online or face to face. I find chatting a good way to relax and express my true feelings.

提案: 回答中有重复和不连贯的问题，建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并避免重复词汇。可以具体说明话题内容，使回答更丰富。

例: I usually chat about popular topics, such as famous people or gossip about friends around us, which I find really fun.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和不完整的句子。建议注意句子完整性和语法正确，使用连接词使表达更清晰。

例: It really depends. If it's an academic discussion, I prefer chatting with a group. But if I want to gossip about someone, I prefer talking to just one friend.

提案: 回答较好，但有些表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复词汇，使表达更地道。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see people's expressions. For example, if they smile during our chat, it shows they enjoy the topic.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方。建议注意动词形式和句子结构，避免重复，并且可以简要说明原因。

例: Not often, but I did argue with my roommate at university. It was a long story and made me very sad. I don't like arguing with friends because it's an unpleasant experience.

× Yes I always chatting with my friends no matter is online or just face to face.

✓ Yes, I am always chatting with my friends no matter if it is online or just face to face.

The original sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'am' before 'always chatting' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'no matter is online' is incorrect; it should be 'no matter if it is online' to correctly introduce the condition.

× I like chatting with my friends is like a sort of way to relax myself and to release my real feelings.

✓ I like chatting with my friends because it is a way to relax myself and to release my real feelings.

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks proper conjunctions. 'I like chatting with my friends is like...' is incorrect; it needs a conjunction like 'because' to connect the two ideas properly.

× I always chat about some hot spot hot topics about famous people or gossip about, uh, gossip about friends who around us.

✓ I always chat about some hot topics about famous people or gossip about friends who are around us.

The phrase 'hot spot hot topics' is redundant and awkward; 'hot topics' suffices. Also, 'friends who around us' lacks the verb 'are' to complete the relative clause.

× It really depends. If is academic discussion, I'd like to chat with a group of people.

✓ It really depends. If it is an academic discussion, I'd like to chat with a group of people.

The sentence is missing the subject pronoun 'it' before 'is academic discussion' and the article 'an' before 'academic discussion'.

× But if I am just gossip about one person around me, maybe I'd like to chat with the only person, because that is.

✓ But if I am just gossiping about one person around me, maybe I'd like to chat with only one person, because that is better.

'I am just gossip about' is incorrect; it should be 'I am just gossiping about' to use the correct verb form. 'The only person' is awkward; 'only one person' is clearer. The sentence ends abruptly; adding 'better' completes the thought.

× I would like to choose communicate face to face 'cause if I chat with people face to face, I can see their expression on their face.

✓ I would like to choose to communicate face to face because if I chat with people face to face, I can see their expressions on their faces.

The verb 'choose' should be followed by 'to communicate' (infinitive form). Also, 'expression on their face' should be plural 'expressions on their faces' to agree with 'people'.

× For example, if they smile when we are chatting, it means that he or she is very happy about this topic.

✓ For example, if they smile when we are chatting, it means that they are very happy about this topic.

Using 'he or she' is awkward when 'they' is already used; maintaining 'they' for singular they is more natural and consistent.

× Not always, but I did argue with friends when I was in university.

✓ Not always, but I argued with friends when I was in university.

The auxiliary 'did' is unnecessary here; simple past tense 'argued' suffices.

× I have a fight with my roommate.

✓ I had a fight with my roommate.

Since the event happened in the past ('when I was in university'), the past tense 'had' should be used instead of present tense 'have'.

× I don't like argue with friends, it's kind of awful experience for me.

✓ I don't like arguing with friends; it's kind of an awful experience for me.

'Like argue' should be 'like arguing' to use the gerund form after 'like'. Also, the two independent clauses should be separated by a semicolon or period. 'Awful experience' needs the article 'an' before it.