Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp và câu không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý muốn nói. Ngoài ra, tránh dùng những câu không rõ nghĩa hoặc sai ngữ pháp.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends in my free time because it helps me relax and recharge after a long day of studying. Moreover, it allows me to improve my communication skills and connect with many people.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn còn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

例: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives. For example, we share our experiences from the day or talk about interesting things that happened recently.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và dùng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý thích của mình một cách tự nhiên hơn.

例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because we can share different stories and experiences, which makes the conversation more interesting.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý kiến của mình.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face rather than via social media because talking in person helps us understand each other better. It also makes me feel more confident and happy during conversations.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có lỗi ngữ pháp và câu chưa rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn.

例: I don't often argue with my friends because we understand each other well. However, sometimes we have disagreements, especially when we make plans and have different opinions.

× I really enjoy testing with my friend in my free time.

✓ I really enjoy chatting with my friend in my free time.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a verb in the '-ing' form that correctly expresses the intended activity. 'Testing' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'chatting' to match the context of talking with friends.

× Is it a wet voice for me to relax and recharge my battery after a long day of studying?

✓ It is a way for me to relax and recharge my battery after a long day of studying.

The phrase 'wet voice' is incorrect and does not make sense in this context. The correct phrase is 'a way' to indicate a method or means of relaxing. Also, the sentence structure was incorrect; it should be a statement, not a question.

× And moreover, I can improve connect with a lot of people.

✓ And moreover, I can improve my connection with a lot of people.

The verb 'improve' should be followed by a noun or noun phrase. 'Connect' is a verb and incorrect here. The correct noun form is 'connection'. Also, the possessive pronoun 'my' is needed to specify whose connection is being improved.

× I usually talk about daily life with my friends.

✓ I usually talk about daily life with my friends.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not require correction.

× We can talk to each other about their experience on the daily day and what happened today or yesterday and is make my friend.

✓ We can talk to each other about our experiences in daily life and what happened today or yesterday, and it helps me make friends.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrect because the speaker is including themselves; 'our' is appropriate. 'On the daily day' is awkward; 'in daily life' is better. 'Is make my friend' is ungrammatical; it should be 'it helps me make friends' to express the intended meaning.

× I prefer to talk with a group to we only one friends because we can have variety of story with different experienced and moreover we can have a lot of stories.

✓ I prefer to talk with a group rather than with only one friend because we can have a variety of stories with different experiences, and moreover, we can have a lot of stories.

The phrase 'to we only one friends' is incorrect; it should be 'rather than with only one friend'. 'Variety of story' should be 'a variety of stories' to match plural form. 'Different experienced' should be 'different experiences' as a plural noun.

× I prefer to communicate face to face to via social media because talk fight to fight can understand each other and is can make me feel more confident when I talk and is very happy and great time to.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media because talking face to face helps us understand each other, and it can make me feel more confident when I talk. It is also a very happy and great time.

The phrase 'face to face to via social media' is incorrect; 'rather than via social media' is correct. 'Talk fight to fight' is incorrect; it should be 'talking face to face'. 'Is can make me' is ungrammatical; 'it can make me' is correct. The last part was fragmented and needed to be rephrased for clarity.

× I don't agree with my friends a lot because we understand each other.

✓ I don't argue with my friends a lot because we understand each other.

The verb 'agree' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'argue' to express disagreement. 'Don't agree' means not having the same opinion, but the intended meaning is that the speaker rarely has arguments.

× However, sometimes we argue with my friends.

✓ However, sometimes I argue with my friends.

The pronoun 'we' is inconsistent with 'my friends' because 'we argue with my friends' implies the speaker and others argue with the speaker's friends, which is illogical. The correct subject is 'I' to indicate the speaker argues with their friends.

× When is it when we have a plan, not have one point so argue.

✓ This happens when we have a plan but do not agree on one point, so we argue.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. It needs to be restructured to express that arguments occur when there is a plan but disagreement on a specific point.