Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Старайтесь использовать правильные грамматические формы и избегать лишних пауз и слов-паразитов. Например, вместо 'I chatting everyday' нужно сказать 'I chat every day'. Также старайтесь строить предложения более естественно и избегать повторов.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my close friends and family every day because it feels more comfortable than video calls or other forms of communication.

提案: Используйте более точные и понятные выражения, избегайте ошибок в словах и грамматике. Например, 'they'll routine' не понятно, лучше сказать 'daily routines'. Также старайтесь давать более конкретные примеры тем для разговора.

例: We usually talk about various topics, such as our daily routines, recent events, and things happening around us.

提案: Обратите внимание на порядок слов и правильное использование выражений. Вместо 'spread my thoughtful clearly' лучше сказать 'express my thoughts clearly'. Также избегайте лишних слов, чтобы ответ был более естественным.

例: I prefer chatting with one close friend because it's more convenient and I can express my thoughts clearly.

提案: Старайтесь строить предложения грамматически правильно и завершать мысли. Например, 'I perform via social media' не подходит, лучше 'I prefer communicating via social media'. Также избегайте незавершённых предложений и слов-паразитов.

例: I prefer communicating via social media because sometimes I feel nervous in face-to-face conversations, and online I can express my thoughts more clearly.

提案: Используйте правильные формы слов и грамматику. Вместо 'it's normally argue' лучше 'it's normal to argue'. Также избегайте повторов и старайтесь формулировать мысли чётко.

例: Sometimes I argue with my friends, and I think it's normal because everyone has their own opinions and ideas.

× I chatting everyday with my close friends, with my family, with my, uh, sisters.

✓ I chat every day with my close friends, with my family, with my, uh, sisters.

The verb 'chatting' is incorrectly used here without an auxiliary verb. The correct form is the simple present tense 'chat' to match the habitual action. Also, 'everyday' should be two words 'every day' when used as an adverbial phrase.

× I like chatting more than for example, umm video or different umm rings because it's more comfortable.

✓ I like chatting more than, for example, video calls or different things because it's more comfortable.

The preposition 'for example' should be separated by commas and followed by a noun phrase. 'Rings' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'things'. Also, 'video' should be 'video calls' for clarity.

× It can be different types of questions or they'll routine.

✓ It can be different types of questions or their routine.

The phrase 'they'll routine' is incorrect. It should be 'their routine' to indicate the usual topics or activities. Also, the sentence structure is awkward and needs correction for clarity.

× I think it's everything what surrounded me, what happened with me in this day.

✓ I think it's everything that surrounds me, what happened to me during the day.

The relative pronoun 'what' is incorrectly used; 'that' is appropriate here. 'Surrounded' should be present tense 'surrounds' to match the present context. 'Happened with me' should be 'happened to me'. 'In this day' is better expressed as 'during the day'.

× I prefer more chatting with only one my close friends because it's more convenient and I can spread my thoughtful clearly.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one of my close friends because it's more convenient and I can express my thoughts clearly.

'More chatting' is incorrect; 'prefer chatting' suffices. 'Only one my close friends' should be 'only one of my close friends'. 'Spread my thoughtful' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'express my thoughts'.

× I perform via social media.

✓ I communicate via social media.

The verb 'perform' is incorrectly used here. The correct verb is 'communicate' to express the idea of interacting or chatting via social media.

× Oh I don't know why but sometimes I umm afraid face to face communication because in social media I can more umm, express my thoughts clearly and don't be.

✓ Oh, I don't know why, but sometimes I am afraid of face-to-face communication because on social media I can express my thoughts more clearly and don't have to be shy.

The verb 'am' is missing before 'afraid'. The phrase 'afraid face to face communication' needs the preposition 'of'. 'In social media' should be 'on social media'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'don't be', which is incomplete; it should be 'don't have to be shy' or similar.

× Sometimes yes and I think it's normally argue with friends because every person have a personal main idea or personal thoughts thought and I think it's very normal.

✓ Sometimes, yes, and I think it's normal to argue with friends because every person has their own main ideas or personal thoughts, and I think it's very normal.

The phrase 'it's normally argue' is incorrect; it should be 'it's normal to argue'. 'Every person have' should be 'every person has' for subject-verb agreement. 'Personal thoughts thought' is redundant; 'personal thoughts' suffices. Also, 'their own' is better than 'a personal' for clarity.