Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在词汇使用错误，如“trading”应为“chatting”，“tried”应为“share”，“communication”应为“communicate”。建议注意动词的正确形式和搭配，避免语法错误。

例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends. We usually share interesting stories about school on WeChat after class. Sometimes, we also communicate face-to-face in cafes or during meals.

提案: 回答中表达不清晰，词汇使用不当，如“tried”应为“talk”，句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地表达主题，并使用恰当的词汇。

例: I usually talk about our daily school life, such as what happened during the weekdays, and sometimes we discuss social media topics online.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但存在语法错误，如“another opinions”应为“other opinions”。建议注意名词单复数和冠词的正确使用。

例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I can make new friends and I really like listening to other opinions and ideas.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇“what what”，且缺少冠词“my friend's body language”。建议注意细节和语法准确性。

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can see my friend's body language and emotions, which helps me quickly understand what she means.

提案: 回答表达基本清楚，但“argue with the school lives”表达不准确，建议使用更合适的短语，如“school life issues”。

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends about different opinions or school life issues, but we always apologize to each other quickly.

× We usually tried school good stories after school on WeChat.

✓ We usually try good school stories after school on WeChat.

句子中使用了过去式“tried”，但句意表达的是经常性的动作，应该使用一般现在时“try”。

× We sometimes communication on cafes or meals face to face.

✓ We sometimes communicate at cafes or during meals face to face.

“communication”是名词，句中应使用动词“communicate”。另外，介词“on”用错，应改为“at”或“during”。

× I only tried about school day lives with friends like the school weekdays, what happened in our school and something idle or social media things online.

✓ I only talk about school daily life with friends, like school weekdays, what happened in our school, and some idle or social media things online.

“tried”用错，表达习惯性动作应使用一般现在时“talk”。“day lives”应为“daily life”。

× I prefer to chat with a group of people because I can make new friends and I really like to listen another opinions and ideas.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because I can make new friends and I really like to listen to other opinions and ideas.

“another”用错，修饰复数名词应使用“other”。“listen”后应加介词“to”。

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see my friends body language and emotion that I can quickly understand what what she mean.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see my friend's body language and emotions, so I can quickly understand what she means.

“friends”应为所有格“friend's”。“emotion”应为复数“emotions”。“what what”重复，应删去一个。动词“mean”应为第三人称单数“means”。

× We sometimes argue with different opinions, sometimes argue with the school lives, but we quickly apologize to each other.

✓ We sometimes argue about different opinions, sometimes argue about school life, but we quickly apologize to each other.

“argue with”用错，正确搭配是“argue about”。“school lives”应为“school life”。