Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达需更自然流畅，避免语法错误，如“helps me more happy”应为“makes me happier”。建议使用更丰富的词汇表达情感和原因。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it brings us closer and is very enjoyable. It also makes me feel happier and helps reduce my stress.

提案: 回答中存在重复词汇“recent recent”，且“musics”应为“music”。建议回答时注意用词准确，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: We usually chat about our recent experiences, movies, music, our favorite idols, and sometimes our dreams.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“make me feel”应为“makes me feel”，且表达不够清晰。建议减少口头语，结构更完整，表达更自然。

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because it makes me feel relaxed. I don't have to think too much and can just enjoy the conversation.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和不自然表达，如“do another things”应为“do other things”，“just sat”应为“just sit”。建议使用更准确的表达和连贯的句子。

例: I prefer communicating face-to-face because it allows us to meet in person. For example, we can sit in a coffee shop and have a wonderful conversation.

提案: 回答中“patients”应为“patient”，且表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和更流畅的句子结构。

例: As far as I remember, we never argue because we are both friendly and patient. If there is a problem, we communicate openly to resolve it.

× It helps me more happy and reduce my stress.

✓ It helps me be happier and reduce my stress.

这里“more happy”用法不正确，应该用比较级形式“happier”。此外，动词“helps”后面需要用动词不定式或动名词形式，这里用“be happier”更合适。

× We usually chat about our recent recent experience and some movies, some musics and our favorite idols and sometimes our dreams.

✓ We usually chat about our recent experiences, some movies, some music, our favorite idols, and sometimes our dreams.

“experience”应使用复数形式“experiences”，因为通常指多次经历；“musics”是不可数名词，不能加复数，应为“music”。

× I prefer chatting with A1 friend because it make me feel, uh, relaxed.

✓ I prefer chatting with a friend because it makes me feel, uh, relaxed.

“A1 friend”应为“a friend”，冠词错误；“make”应与主语“it”保持第三人称单数一致，改为“makes”。

× I prefer chatting with A1 friend because it make me feel, uh, relaxed.

✓ I prefer chatting with a friend because it makes me feel, uh, relaxed.

主语“it”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，故“make”应改为“makes”。

× I prefer communicating face to face because it's a good way to, umm, help us meet each other and we can do another things like just sat in the coffee shop and face to face chat.

✓ I prefer communicating face to face because it's a good way to, umm, help us meet each other and we can do other things like just sitting in the coffee shop and chatting face to face.

“another things”应为“other things”，因为“another”用于单数，“things”是复数；“just sat”应改为动名词形式“just sitting”；“face to face chat”应改为动名词“chatting face to face”。

× If we have some umm wrong, we will all communicate.

✓ If we have some umm wrongs, we will all communicate.

“wrong”作为名词时应使用复数“wrongs”，表示错误的事情。