Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时时态不一致，且表达略显重复。建议使用一致的时态，并避免重复表达“relax”。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me feel relaxed and relieves my stress.

提案: 表达中存在语法错误，如“share my emotions to my friends”应为“share my emotions with my friends”。建议使用更准确的介词和更连贯的句子结构。

例: When I feel stressed, I usually share my feelings with my friends, and they help me relax. I also like to share interesting things I have seen and my happy moments with them.

提案: 回答中词汇使用不当，如“trading”应为“chatting”，且表达不清晰。建议使用正确词汇并清楚表达观点。

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because I can share my thoughts face to face and get their direct feedback.

提案: 语法和词汇错误较多，如“communicate face to face processing”不正确，且“imagines”应为“ideas”。建议使用正确表达和词汇。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it is easier to understand each other's ideas clearly, especially when something is unclear.

提案: 回答语法错误严重，表达不完整且难以理解。建议简洁明了地描述经历，使用正确语法。

例: Yes, I have argued with my friends before because we had different opinions about a certain topic, but we resolved it soon after.

× I think when I was chatting with them I feel so relaxed and it is a really good way for me to relax myself.

✓ I think when I was chatting with them I felt so relaxed and it is a really good way for me to relax myself.

这里的动作发生在过去，应该使用过去时态felt，而不是现在时态feel。

× When I feel stressful, I always share my emotions to my friends and they can help me to feel more unwind and when I see something before, I always share with them too.

✓ When I feel stressed, I always share my emotions with my friends and they can help me to feel more relaxed and when I see something before, I always share with them too.

stressful是形容事物的，描述人的情绪应使用stressed；动词share后应接介词with而非to；unwind用作形容词不合适，改为relaxed更准确。

× I want to share my happiness to them too.

✓ I want to share my happiness with them too.

动词share后应接介词with而非to。

× I think trading with only one friend is a better way for me.

✓ I think chatting with only one friend is a better way for me.

这里应使用chatting（聊天）而非trading（交易），词义错误。

× I want to share my images face to face and I want she or he give me the same images.

✓ I want to share my ideas face to face and I want him or her to give me the same ideas.

images用词不当，应为ideas；主语she或he后缺少to，且应使用宾格him或her。

× I like communicate face to face processing.

✓ I like communicating face to face.

动词like后应接动名词communicating；processing多余且不合适。

× It is more easy to share our imagines clearly if we don't understand others says.

✓ It is easier to share our ideas clearly if we don't understand what others say.

more easy应改为比较级easier；imagines用词错误，应为ideas；others says语法错误，应为what others say。

× Actually, I argued with my friends one time. She has she imagines I have my images and we have different things about one thing, but we being.

✓ Actually, I argued with my friend one time. She has her ideas, I have my ideas, and we have different opinions about one thing, but we got along.

friends应为friend单数；she imagines应为her ideas；images应为ideas；句子末尾we being不完整，改为we got along更通顺。