Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more structured and clear. Start with a direct response, then add specific reasons or examples. Avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I love chatting with my friends because it helps me stay connected. Although people don't chat as much nowadays, we often send reels to each other daily. However, when there is an important topic, I prefer chatting over calling.

提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Focus on giving specific topics you chat about and use linking words to organize your ideas. Also, correct grammar and vocabulary mistakes to improve clarity.

例: I usually chat about various topics with my friends. For example, we discuss our studies, share opinions about teachers, and sometimes plan to visit new restaurants together.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more formal language and linking words. Also, try to avoid repetition and make sentences more fluent.

例: I prefer both options because sometimes I want to share personal thoughts with one friend, so I text them directly. However, if I have something to share with everyone, I prefer chatting in a group.

提案: Try to organize your answer clearly with correct grammar. Use linking words to explain reasons. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can express my facial expressions and emotions better. On social media, it is difficult to show how I truly feel or how something impacts me.

提案: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to give a clear and direct response, explain why arguments happen, and use linking words to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different opinions. However, these arguments are normal and help us understand each other better.

× We sometimes sending reels to each other every day on purpose.

✓ We sometimes send reels to each other every day on purpose.

The verb 'sending' is incorrectly used here; the correct form is the base verb 'send' after 'sometimes' to indicate habitual action in the present tense.

× something topic to tell with my friends

✓ something to tell my friends about

The preposition 'with' is incorrectly used here; the correct phrase is 'tell my friends about' to indicate the topic of discussion.

× I prefer chatting rather than call.

✓ I prefer chatting rather than calling.

The verb after 'rather than' should be in the gerund form to maintain parallel structure; 'calling' is correct instead of 'call'.

× I basically chat about out other things.

✓ I basically chat about other things.

The word 'out' is unnecessary and incorrect here; 'chat about other things' is the correct phrase.

× They are sending some rails so I replied them back and the was the topic study topic the teacher teaches and how is she or he wanna visit new restaurant with me.

✓ They are sending some reels so I replied to them, and the topic was about the study topic the teacher teaches and whether she or he wants to visit a new restaurant with me.

Multiple errors: 'rails' should be 'reels'; 'replied them back' should be 'replied to them'; sentence structure is confusing and needs clarification; 'wanna' should be 'wants to'; proper articles and prepositions are needed.

× I just wanna talk a specific person so I just ask text him or her or if there was something I wanna tell everyone I prefer group.

✓ I just want to talk to a specific person, so I just text him or her, or if there is something I want to tell everyone, I prefer a group.

'Talk a specific person' should be 'talk to a specific person'; 'ask text' is incorrect, should be 'text'; 'was' should be 'is' to match present tense; 'wanna' should be 'want to'; article 'a' is needed before 'group'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because is it can express my facial reaction as well in phase 2IN social media I can't express my reaction how I feel or sometimes I can't say it like how it gonna impact on me but.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it can express my facial reactions as well. On social media, I can't express my reactions or how I feel, or sometimes I can't say how it is going to impact me.

Incorrect prepositions and sentence structure: 'in phase 2IN' is unclear and likely a typo; 'gonna' should be 'going to'; sentence split for clarity; 'impact on me' should be 'impact me'.

× Yeah, of course friends is basically we are same as.

✓ Yeah, of course, friends are basically the same as us.

'Friends' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'; 'we are same as' is incomplete and should be 'the same as us'.

× So sometimes there was many talk which is we are not do support so sometimes we give suggestion and during this the argument is basic.

✓ So sometimes there are many talks where we do not support each other, so sometimes we give suggestions, and during this, the argument is basic.

'There was' should be 'there are' to match plural 'talks'; 'talk' should be plural 'talks'; 'we are not do support' is incorrect, should be 'we do not support'; 'suggestion' should be plural 'suggestions'; sentence structure improved for clarity.