Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng thì đúng (ví dụ: "what happens" thay vì "what happen"). Ngoài ra, bạn nên dùng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and refresh my mind after studying. We usually talk about familiar topics, such as our favorite movies or events that happened at home or school.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, tránh lỗi như "there's some several topics" (nên là "there are several topics") và "discuss about" (nên là "discuss"). Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý.

例: We often talk about several topics, such as our favorite movies or what happens at school or at home, especially before exams. We also share ideas to help each other prepare better.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như "While comparisons a group of people" và "I brief chat". Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, sử dụng thì đúng và tránh lặp từ. Hơn nữa, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn với câu chủ đề và câu bổ sung.

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows for more meaningful and intimate conversations. For example, I can talk about personal topics like my feelings or school matters without feeling judged.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "every few enjoy" không đúng, nên là "I enjoy" hoặc "I prefer". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có liên kết giữa các ý để mạch lạc hơn.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more real. We can use body language, which makes the conversation more intimate and personal.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ "discuss about" nên là "discuss", "several idea" nên là "several ideas", và "contradict idea" nên là "contradictory ideas". Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt hơn.

例: Sometimes, when we discuss a topic and have different or even contradictory ideas, we argue to defend our opinions.

× chatting with my friend is a perfect way for me to unwind and recharge my mind after getting stressed from my study.

✓ chatting with my friends is a perfect way for me to unwind and recharge my mind after getting stressed from my studies.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because chatting usually involves more than one friend. Also, 'study' should be plural 'studies' to refer to academic work in general.

× we often discuss with our familiar topics such as our favorite movie or what happen at home or at school.

✓ we often discuss familiar topics such as our favorite movies or what happens at home or at school.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect after 'discuss'. We say 'discuss topics' without 'with'. Also, 'familiar' is better without 'our' here, and 'movie' should be plural 'movies' to match 'topics'. 'Happen' should be 'happens' to agree with singular subject 'what'.

× there's some several topics we often talk with my friend, such as our favorite movie or discuss about what happens at school or at home sometime before an exam.

✓ there are several topics we often talk about with my friends, such as our favorite movies or discuss what happens at school or at home sometime before an exam.

'There's' should be 'there are' because 'topics' is plural. 'Some several' is redundant; 'several' alone is sufficient. 'Talk with' should be 'talk about'. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends'. 'Discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not need 'about'. 'Movie' should be plural 'movies'.

× We also share more idea.

✓ We also share more ideas.

'Idea' should be plural 'ideas' because 'more' implies plural countable nouns.

× While comparisons a group of people, I brief chat with my girlfriend because it give me more meaningful conversation without rejection.

✓ Compared to chatting with a group of people, I prefer brief chats with my girlfriend because they give me more meaningful conversations without rejection.

'Comparisons' is incorrect; the correct form is 'Compared to'. 'Brief chat' should be plural 'brief chats' to match the context. 'It give' should be 'they give' to agree with plural subject 'chats'. 'Conversation' should be plural 'conversations'.

× Moreover, I can I can attend a intimate discussion about vulnerability or school.

✓ Moreover, I can attend an intimate discussion about vulnerability or school.

The phrase 'I can I can' is a repetition error; one 'I can' should be removed. 'A intimate' is incorrect; 'an intimate' is correct because 'intimate' starts with a vowel sound.

× Well every few enjoy face to face communication because it's give me a feeling of reality and we can either use body language while talking with each other which made the conversation more intimate and personal.

✓ Well, I enjoy face-to-face communication every now and then because it gives me a feeling of reality and we can use body language while talking with each other, which makes the conversation more intimate and personal.

'Every few' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'every now and then' or 'occasionally'. 'It's give' should be 'it gives' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Either' is unnecessary here. 'Made' should be 'makes' to agree with present tense.

× Well, sometime it also happens when we discuss about a topic and we have several idea or even contradict idea, we will argue with each other to protect our opinion.

✓ Well, sometimes it also happens when we discuss a topic and we have several ideas or even contradictory ideas; we argue with each other to protect our opinions.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not need 'about'. 'Idea' should be plural 'ideas'. 'Contradict idea' should be 'contradictory ideas' to use the correct adjective form. 'Will argue' can be simplified to 'argue' to match the present tense narrative. 'Opinion' should be plural 'opinions'.