Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

× Yeah, I like chatting with my friends because when I stay home alone I feel very lonely. So I need to chat with my friends to feel, to follow my heart.

✓ Yeah, I like chatting with my friends because when I stay home alone I feel very lonely. So I need to chat with my friends to feel, to follow my heart.

此句中动词形式使用正确，无需修改。

× I already chat with my friends about daily life and works because uh we work day and day and can't connect with other people so I usually chat with my friends.

✓ I already chat with my friends about daily life and work because uh we work day and day and can't connect with other people so I usually chat with my friends.

“works”应为不可数名词“work”，表示工作内容。复数形式“works”通常指艺术作品或工程项目。

× Actually, both of them might do. We have a WeChat group with my college classmate classmates and we usually chat with only one friend, usually with my high school.

✓ Actually, both of them might do. We have a WeChat group with my college classmates and we usually chat with only one friend, usually with my high school friend.

“classmate classmates”重复，应为复数“classmates”；“my high school”缺少名词，应补充“friend”。

× Usually I prefer to communicate fast for fares because I think face to face communication can improve my uh communication skills. It's better than UH connect on the on the Internet.

✓ Usually I prefer to communicate face to face because I think face to face communication can improve my communication skills. It's better than connecting on the Internet.

“fast for fares”应为“face to face”；“connect on the on the Internet”应为“connecting on the Internet”，动词形式和介词使用错误。

× It's seldom like this. I think we need a tolerant attitude with friends in daily life or communication, uh, which is, uh, most important is happy with.

✓ It's seldom like this. I think we need a tolerant attitude with friends in daily life or communication, uh, which is, uh, the most important is being happy together.

“most important”前应加定冠词“the”；“happy with”表达不完整，应改为“being happy together”以表达完整意思。