Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "love to do chatting"; instead, say "I love chatting." Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct minor grammar issues, for example, "I have school friends and work colleagues."

例: Yes, I love chatting with my friends. As an extrovert, I have many friends from school and work. I enjoy spending time talking with them to understand their problems, and I also share mine so they can offer advice.

提案: Your answer covers the topic but lacks clarity and coherence. Try to use linking words like "with" and "and" properly to connect ideas. Also, avoid vague phrases like "and all that stuff"; instead, be specific. Additionally, correct expressions such as "builder grade experience" which is unclear.

例: I usually chat about studies with my school and university friends. With my work friends, I discuss work-related problems and ways to gain better experience in our field.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid phrases like "I won't be able to listen to one single idea" which is confusing. Also, the ending "So I wish there" is incomplete. Use linking words to clarify your points and improve sentence structure.

例: I prefer chatting with a group because everyone can share their ideas and opinions. In contrast, chatting with just one person limits the variety of perspectives I can hear.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid awkward phrases like "people don't have their real and actual life"; instead, say "people often present a different image online." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see people's facial expressions, which is missing on social media. Also, social media often shows a curated version of people's lives rather than reality.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains repetition and awkward phrasing. Try to be more concise and clear. For example, avoid repeating "difficult situation" and use linking words to explain your reasoning logically.

例: I usually avoid arguing with my friends. However, if they make a wrong decision, I try to offer helpful advice because I don't want them to face problems.

× Yes, I love to do chatting with my friends.

✓ Yes, I love chatting with my friends.

The verb 'love' is followed by a gerund (-ing form) when expressing enjoyment of an activity. 'Love to do chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'love chatting'.

× I have my school friends, have my work colleagues as my friend and I love to spend time chatting with them and get to know about their problems.

✓ I have my school friends, have my work colleagues as my friends and I love to spend time chatting with them and getting to know their problems.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to agree with 'work colleagues' (plural). Also, 'get to know about' should be 'getting to know' for parallel structure and correct preposition use.

× I love to spend time chatting with them and get to know about their problems.

✓ I love to spend time chatting with them and getting to know their problems.

After 'love to spend time', the verbs should be in parallel form. 'Chatting' and 'getting' are gerunds and should be used consistently. Also, 'get to know about' is incorrect; 'get to know' is the correct phrase.

× I usually like to chat about studies with my school friends and my university friends and with my work friends I like to chat about any work problems we have and what we should do to get a builder grade experience and all that stuff.

✓ I usually like chatting about studies with my school friends and my university friends, and with my work friends, I like chatting about any work problems we have and what we should do to get a better grade of experience and all that stuff.

After 'like', the gerund form 'chatting' is preferred over 'to chat' for habitual actions. Also, 'builder grade experience' seems incorrect; 'better grade of experience' is clearer.

× Well I like to chat with a group of people instead of just being with an individual because I think in a group chat all people can have their own idea and their own main point.

✓ Well, I like to chat with a group of people instead of just being with an individual because I think in a group chat all people can have their own ideas and their own main points.

'Idea' and 'main point' should be plural to agree with 'all people' who have multiple ideas and points.

× Whereas if there is individual person then I won't be able to listen to one single idea. So I wish there.

✓ Whereas if there is an individual person, then I won't be able to listen to more than one single idea. So I prefer group chats.

The sentence lacks the article 'an' before 'individual person'. Also, 'So I wish there' is incomplete and unclear; it should be replaced with a clear conclusion like 'So I prefer group chats.'

× I like to communicate face to face rather than social media because on social media people don't have their real and actual life, it's just for the social people.

✓ I like to communicate face to face rather than via social media because on social media people don't have their real and actual life; it's just for social purposes.

The phrase 'rather than social media' needs the preposition 'via' to indicate the medium. Also, 'just for the social people' is unclear; 'just for social purposes' is more appropriate.

× While face to face I would be able to see the face reactions of a person while talking to me, whereas on social media I can't do that.

✓ When communicating face to face, I am able to see a person's facial reactions while they talk to me, whereas on social media I can't do that.

The sentence structure is awkward. 'While face to face' should be 'When communicating face to face'. 'Face reactions' should be 'facial reactions'.

× I don't like to argue with my friends, but of course if they are making any wrong decision then I would give them a a good solution about them because I don't like to make them in any difficult situation and I argue with them if they're making any difficult situation.

✓ I don't like to argue with my friends, but of course if they are making any wrong decisions, then I would give them a good solution because I don't like to put them in any difficult situation, and I argue with them if they're creating any difficult situation.

'Any wrong decision' should be plural 'any wrong decisions' to match generality. The phrase 'a a good solution about them' is incorrect; it should be 'a good solution'. 'Make them in any difficult situation' is incorrect; 'put them in any difficult situation' is correct. Also, 'making any difficult situation' should be 'creating any difficult situation'.