Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词汇，且使用了过多的填充词“umm”，建议减少填充词，注意动词形式的正确使用，并使表达更简洁自然。

例: I enjoy chatting with close friends because we share common interests, but I find it harder to start conversations with unfamiliar people.

提案: 回答内容较为笼统，且出现了不清晰的词汇（如“PO politics”），建议使用更具体的词汇和表达，避免模糊和错误的单词。

例: We usually discuss current social events and national issues, such as environmental protection and political developments, which I find very meaningful.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇“of of”，表达略显冗长，建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达，并注意语法准确。

例: I prefer chatting with a group during assignments because it helps us share knowledge and brainstorm ideas together.

提案: 回答中语法不够准确，句子结构不够流畅，建议注意主谓一致，简化表达，并避免重复词汇。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see facial expressions and body language, but social media is convenient for staying in touch anytime and anywhere.

提案: 回答表达不够自然，句子结构重复且有些笨拙，建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复词汇，并丰富细节。

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when we have different opinions, but it helps us understand each other better and share our feelings.

× I'd like to chatting with them because we have common topics and the things we favor to talk about.

✓ I'd like to chat with them because we have common topics and the things we favor to talk about.

动词短语 'would like to' 后面应接动词原形，不能接动名词。这里应使用 'chat' 而非 'chatting'。

× For some group assignments, I prefer to chat with a group instead of of a person because it helps to gather our knowledge about those assignments and it can brainstorm our mind.

✓ For some group assignments, I prefer to chat with a group instead of a person because it helps to gather our knowledge about those assignments and it can brainstorm our minds.

短语中重复了 'of'，应去掉一个；'brainstorm our mind' 中 'mind' 应为复数形式 'minds'，因为是多个人的思维。

× For some face to face communications, I think it could directly see the facial expression of them and to understand their body language.

✓ For some face-to-face communications, I think I could directly see their facial expressions and understand their body language.

'face to face' 应连字符连接为 'face-to-face'；'it could directly see' 主语错误，应为 'I could directly see'；'the facial expression of them' 应改为 'their facial expressions'，更自然。

× But social media is good too because wherever we go, we could we would see them and talk to them in WeChat or Instagram.

✓ But social media is good too because wherever we go, we can see them and talk to them on WeChat or Instagram.

'could we would' 是重复且错误的表达，应选用 'can' 表示一般能力；'in WeChat or Instagram' 应改为 'on WeChat or Instagram'，介词使用错误。