Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并补充完整的观点。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me expand my social circle. Also, they support me whenever I face difficulties.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅，建议使用更自然的表达并补充细节。

例: I usually chat with my friends about our shared interests. For instance, my little brother and I often talk about basketball because we both enjoy playing it.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不清晰，建议简化句子并明确表达观点。

例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows me to meet new friends and share experiences with them.

提案: 回答未完成且表达不完整，建议补充完整句子并提供具体原因。

例: I prefer communicating via social media because it is more convenient and allows me to stay connected with friends anytime and anywhere.

提案: 回答不完整且有重复，建议完整表达观点并使用连贯的句子。

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends about our studies. When we face difficult questions, we discuss different ways to solve them, which can lead to disagreements.

× I believe that the chatting with my friends can build my social circle and also every time when I meet some difficulties, they can.

✓ I believe that chatting with my friends can build my social circle and also every time when I meet some difficulties, they can help.

动词后不需要加定冠词“the”，且动名词用法中不需要“the”。此外，句子末尾缺少谓语动词，需补充完整。

× I usually chat about with friends in our mutual interest.

✓ I usually chat with friends about our mutual interests.

动词“chat”后直接跟“with friends”，介词“about”应放在宾语之后，且“interest”应为复数形式。

× I tend to chat with my bro little brother, uh, basketball because, uh, we are, we are all really into playing basket.

✓ I tend to chat with my little brother about basketball because we are all really into playing basketball.

“bro little brother”表达重复，应简化为“little brother”。“basket”应为“basketball”，且“chat about basketball”表达更准确。

× I prefer to chat with a group on group of people because I can make new make more new friends if I chat with a group of people because due to the fact that we can share our new friends with with.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because I can make more new friends if I chat with a group of people since we can share with each other.

“group on group”重复且错误，应为“group of people”。“make new make more new friends”重复，应简化为“make more new friends”。“share our new friends with with”表达不完整，应为“share with each other”。

× So every time when I want to socialize with my friends, I can just.

✓ So every time when I want to socialize with my friends, I can just do it.

句子缺少谓语动词，导致结构不完整，需要补充完整表达。

× So at that time, we tend to have different, different.

✓ So at that time, we tend to have different opinions.

句子末尾缺少名词，导致表达不完整，需要补充具体内容。