Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more structured and clear. Start with a direct response, then add specific details using linking words like 'because' or 'for example'. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors to sound more natural.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows us to share stories about our day. For example, we often talk about what we have done and how our families are doing.

提案: Focus on giving a clear and concise answer. Use linking words like 'usually' and 'for example' to organise your ideas. Avoid unclear phrases and repetition to improve clarity.

例: I usually chat about how our day went and what we have done or plan to do. For example, sometimes we share gossip or random topics during our conversations.

提案: Answer directly and clearly. Use correct grammar and linking words like 'because' to explain your preference. Avoid hesitation and unclear expressions to sound more confident.

例: I prefer chatting with one or two friends because I don't have a large group. This way, we can discuss personal topics without worrying about others feeling hurt.

提案: Try to organise your answer with clear sentences and use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'. Avoid awkward phrases and focus on expressing your ideas naturally.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows us to share emotions better. For example, seeing facial expressions helps understand the conversation more clearly than social media.

提案: Make your answer clearer and more structured. Use simple sentences and linking words like 'because' and 'for example'. Avoid confusing phrases and focus on explaining your point logically.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when we disagree on certain topics. For example, we had a disagreement about caste, and I couldn't accept his views, so we argued about it.

× Yeah, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it's so wonderful to enjoy and share the stories, even my stories.

✓ Yeah, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it's so wonderful to enjoy and share stories, even my own stories.

The phrase 'share the stories' is incorrect because 'stories' is a general plural noun here and does not need the definite article 'the'. Also, 'my stories' is better expressed as 'my own stories' to clarify possession and emphasis.

× And we will discuss on the text that what we have done on the day and how is the families going and we will discuss all the things which have done in the day.

✓ And we will discuss the text about what we have done during the day and how the families are doing, and we will discuss all the things that have been done in the day.

The preposition 'on' after 'discuss' is incorrect; 'discuss' is a transitive verb and does not require a preposition. Also, 'on the day' should be 'during the day' to indicate the time period. 'How is the families going' is incorrect subject-verb order and subject number; it should be 'how the families are doing'. 'Which have done' should be 'that have been done' to correctly form the relative clause and passive voice.

× I usually chat about how was the day going and what they have done and what they are doing and what is going to happen and there are more gossip even and there are more gossip goes on the chat and there is no Ishwari charitable.

✓ I usually chat about how the day was going, what they have done, what they are doing, and what is going to happen. There is also more gossip, and more gossip goes on in the chat, and there is no Ishwari charitable.

The phrase 'how was the day going' is incorrect word order for indirect questions; it should be 'how the day was going'. 'There are more gossip even' is ungrammatical; 'gossip' is uncountable and should be singular with 'there is'. 'More gossip goes on the chat' needs the preposition 'in' instead of 'on'. The phrase 'there is no Ishwari charitable' is unclear but kept as is due to lack of context.

× Actually, I won't because I'm not have a huge amount of friends.

✓ Actually, I won't because I don't have a huge number of friends.

The phrase 'I'm not have' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'I don't have'. Also, 'amount of friends' is incorrect because 'friends' is countable; it should be 'number of friends'.

× Even I don't have a group of friends, I do have a two to three friends.

✓ Even though I don't have a group of friends, I do have two to three friends.

The phrase 'a two to three friends' is incorrect because 'friends' is plural and does not need the article 'a'. Also, 'Even' should be 'Even though' to correctly introduce the contrast.

× So I prefer to chat with a one or two friend because uh, we can discuss more things which other people should not hurt even.

✓ So I prefer to chat with one or two friends because, uh, we can discuss more things which other people should not be hurt by.

The phrase 'a one or two friend' is incorrect; 'one or two' is plural so 'friends' should be plural and no article 'a' is needed. Also, the phrase 'should not hurt even' is unclear and corrected to 'should not be hurt by' to make sense.

× I do prefer to communicate face to face because more than the social media, it's good to communicate on face to face because we can share more topics with emotion.

✓ I do prefer to communicate face to face because, more than social media, it's good to communicate face to face since we can share more topics with emotion.

The phrase 'communicate on face to face' is incorrect; 'face to face' is an adverbial phrase and does not need a preposition. Also, 'more than the social media' should be 'more than social media' without 'the'.

× There is no endless about the speech what we used to talk and it is more good to see the emotion through it.

✓ There is no end to the speech we used to talk about, and it is better to see the emotion through it.

The phrase 'no endless about the speech' is incorrect; 'endless' is an adjective and should be replaced with the noun 'end'. Also, 'more good' is incorrect; the comparative form is 'better'.

× Yes, I used to argue with my friends because if the topic is not which I can't able to accept.

✓ Yes, I used to argue with my friends because if the topic is one that I can't accept.

The phrase 'can't able to accept' is incorrect; 'can't' and 'able to' both express ability and should not be combined. The correct form is 'can't accept'. Also, 'is not which' is awkward and corrected to 'is one that'.

× So I used to argue on the topic for example me and my friend when we talk about the cast and which is he so hint of it and which I'm not that into it and I used to argue why he's so getting into it on the topic.

✓ So I used to argue on the topic. For example, my friend and I, when we talk about the caste, and he is very interested in it, but I'm not that into it, and I used to argue why he's so involved in the topic.

The phrase 'me and my friend' should be 'my friend and I' as the subject of the sentence. 'Cast' is likely a misspelling of 'caste'. 'Which is he so hint of it' is unclear and corrected to 'he is very interested in it'. 'He's so getting into it' is ungrammatical and corrected to 'he's so involved in it'.