Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid informal phrases like "kinda" and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, add a linking word to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because I am a talkative person, and I really like sharing my thoughts as well as listening to theirs.

提案: Avoid repetition and redundancy such as "just" and "basic friendly communication." Use linking words to connect ideas and provide more specific examples.

例: Usually, we talk about our daily routines and current news, and we also share our thoughts. Additionally, we often support each other during difficult times.

提案: Correct grammatical errors and awkward phrasing such as "in the early." Use clearer linking words and more precise vocabulary.

例: I prefer talking with a group of friends, especially those I already know, rather than just one friend because I consider myself an extrovert, and group conversations energize me.

提案: Avoid repetition of "because" and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, use more precise vocabulary like "facial expressions" instead of "mimics."

例: I prefer face-to-face communication rather than using social media because it allows me to see facial expressions and body language, which are important for understanding emotions.

提案: Correct the word "Know" to "No" and provide a more complete answer with linking words and specific reasons.

例: No, that hardly ever happens because we usually understand each other well and try to avoid arguments to maintain our friendship.

× Yes I do like chatting with my friends because I'm kinda talkative person and I really like sharing my thoughts and listening to others.

✓ Yes, I do like chatting with my friends because I'm a kind of talkative person and I really like sharing my thoughts and listening to others.

The phrase 'kinda talkative person' is informal and grammatically incorrect. 'Kinda' is a colloquial contraction of 'kind of' and should be used carefully. Also, the article 'a' is missing before 'talkative person'. The correct form is 'a kind of talkative person' or simply 'a talkative person'. Adding the article 'a' is necessary because 'person' is a singular countable noun.

× Usually we just talk about daily routine, Daily News or just sharing thoughts.

✓ Usually we just talk about our daily routine, daily news, or just share thoughts.

The phrase 'talk about daily routine' lacks a possessive determiner; it should be 'our daily routine' to specify whose routine is being discussed. Also, 'Daily News' should not be capitalized unless referring to a specific publication; here it seems to mean general news, so 'daily news' is appropriate. Additionally, 'just sharing thoughts' is inconsistent with the verb form 'talk about'; it should be 'just share thoughts' to maintain parallel structure.

× I prefer to talk with a group of friends, especially the group that I already know, rather than only one friend.

✓ I prefer to talk with a group of friends, especially a group that I already know, rather than with only one friend.

The phrase 'the group that I already know' implies a specific group previously mentioned, but here it is more natural to say 'a group that I already know' to indicate any familiar group. Also, 'rather than only one friend' should be 'rather than with only one friend' to maintain parallel prepositional structure with 'talk with'.

× I believe that is because I'm considering myself as a as an extrovert and that fulfills me in the early and gives me energy to talk with friends.

✓ I believe that is because I consider myself an extrovert and that fulfills me early and gives me energy to talk with friends.

The phrase 'I'm considering myself as a as an extrovert' is incorrect. The verb 'consider' is used without 'as' when followed by a noun phrase, so it should be 'I consider myself an extrovert'. Also, 'in the early' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'early' without 'in the'. The sentence is also simplified for clarity.

× I prefer to communicate in real life rather than in messengers because that it's important to me to see facial expressions and mimics when I talk with someone because I think that's also important to see body language.

✓ I prefer to communicate in real life rather than through messengers because it's important to me to see facial expressions and mimics when I talk with someone, and I think it's also important to see body language.

The phrase 'in messengers' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'through' when referring to communication via messaging apps. Also, 'that it's important' should be 'it's important' for clarity. The sentence is adjusted for better flow and clarity.

× Know that hardly ever happens.

✓ No, that hardly ever happens.

The word 'Know' is a typo or mishearing of 'No'. The sentence lacks a subject and verb agreement and is incomplete. Correcting it to 'No, that hardly ever happens.' makes it a complete and grammatically correct sentence.