Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn. Bạn nên nói trực tiếp, tránh dùng nhiều từ ngữ thừa và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I definitely like chatting with my friends because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. Talking with them helps me unwind after a busy day.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và không đầy đủ ý. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn về chủ đề bạn thường nói chuyện.

例: I usually chat with my friends about our studies, school events, and daily life. For example, we often discuss homework and upcoming exams.

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trình bày ý kiến rõ ràng và giải thích lý do cụ thể.

例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it makes me feel happy and more outgoing. I enjoy sharing ideas and jokes with several friends at once.

提案: Câu trả lời cần sử dụng ngữ pháp đúng và tránh lặp từ. Bạn nên nói rõ lý do tại sao bạn thích giao tiếp trực tiếp hơn và dùng từ vựng phù hợp.

例: I prefer communicating face-to-face rather than via social media because it makes me feel more comfortable and happy. Face-to-face conversations are more genuine and trustworthy.

提案: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và thiếu chi tiết. Bạn nên trả lời đầy đủ, tránh lặp từ và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

例: Sometimes I argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions. For example, in grade 6, my friend and I argued about which game was better to play during recess.

× Uh, definitely yes. Uh, a big part of the reason go to the fact that umm, it's make me to feel happy and relaxing uh, as a result, uh, I really like chatting with my friends.

✓ Uh, definitely yes. Uh, a big part of the reason goes to the fact that umm, it makes me feel happy and relaxed, uh, as a result, uh, I really like chatting with my friends.

The verb 'go' should be in third person singular form 'goes' to agree with the singular subject 'a big part'. 'Make' should be 'makes' for the same reason. 'Make me to feel' is incorrect; the correct form is 'makes me feel' without 'to'. 'Relaxing' should be 'relaxed' to describe the feeling, not the action. Suggestions: Use correct subject-verb agreement and proper verb forms after modal verbs.

× I usually just greet my friends about everything except for example our studying in my, our friends in our class, our in our school. The main reason for that is that me I.

✓ I usually just greet my friends about everything, for example, our studying, our friends in our class, and our school. The main reason for that is me.

The phrase 'except for example' is incorrect; 'for example' is the correct phrase to introduce examples. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; restructuring improves clarity. 'The main reason for that is that me I' is ungrammatical; 'The main reason for that is me' is correct. Suggestions: Use 'for example' properly and ensure sentence completeness.

× Uh, I prefer to chat with a group of people, uh, to only run friends. The married and father did that, Umm, it's make me feel happy and, uh, extroverts, uh, when I trust, uh, just in a group of people, uh, other result, uh.

✓ Uh, I prefer to chat with a group of people, uh, to only one friend. The main reason for that is it makes me feel happy and extroverted when I trust, uh, just in a group of people, uh, as a result, uh.

'Run friends' is incorrect; likely intended 'one friend'. 'Married and father did that' is unclear and likely a mishearing or error; replaced with 'main reason for that'. 'It's make' should be 'it makes' for subject-verb agreement. 'Extroverts' should be 'extroverted' as an adjective describing feeling. Suggestions: Use correct singular/plural forms and proper adjectives.

× I prefer to communicating face to face to a VR social media. The simple reason for that is make me feel comfortable in more happy than uh, trusting, trusting, uh, on social media as a result, umm.

✓ I prefer communicating face to face to using social media. The simple reason for that is it makes me feel more comfortable and happier than trusting social media, as a result, umm.

'Prefer to communicating' is incorrect; 'prefer communicating' or 'prefer to communicate' is correct. 'To a VR social media' is unclear; replaced with 'using social media'. 'Make me feel comfortable in more happy' is incorrect; should be 'makes me feel more comfortable and happier'. Suggestions: Use correct verb forms after 'prefer' and proper comparative forms.

× Uh, kinder, uh, but sometimes I argue with my friends. Umm, I remember umm umm, when I and my friend in grade 6, umm, we are, we are, we argued, uh, together about.

✓ Uh, kind of, uh, but sometimes I argue with my friends. Umm, I remember, umm, when my friend and I were in grade 6, umm, we argued together about something.

'Kinder' should be 'kind of' as a filler phrase. 'I and my friend' should be 'my friend and I' for correct pronoun order. 'We are, we are, we argued' is incorrect; 'we were' is past tense of 'to be' and needed before 'in grade 6'. The sentence is incomplete; added 'about something' to complete it. Suggestions: Use correct pronoun order and past tense forms.