Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不够自然，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且注意时态和冠词的使用。可以先直接回答问题，然后用一两个具体例子支持观点。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. We often talk about our daily lives and share updates about mutual friends, which helps strengthen our relationships.

提案: 回答中有口语填充词较多，影响流畅度。建议减少“umm”等语气词，使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词使内容更连贯。

例: As I mentioned, we usually discuss our daily lives, including work and fashion. Additionally, since we are fans of Korean pop, we often talk about our favorite celebrities and their music and dance performances.

提案: 回答表达有些重复和不够简洁，建议避免重复词汇，注意代词一致性，并用更自然的表达方式。

例: To be honest, I prefer chatting with one friend because I can fully focus on their ideas and give thoughtful responses.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但有语法错误，如主谓一致和介词使用。建议注意语法准确性，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Actually, I think both face-to-face communication and social media are useful. However, I usually spend more time on social media because my friends live in different cities, so we communicate mainly through apps like WeChat.

提案: 回答中填充词过多，影响表达清晰度。建议减少“uh”等语气词，注意时态一致性和语法正确，表达更简洁明了。

例: Yes, I have argued with friends before, but not often because we usually consider each other's perspectives. Most of our arguments happened when we were in junior high school.

× I like communicating with my friends not for example we sometimes talk about our daily life or sometimes our talk about our common friends about their marriage and college life which makes me feel our relationship become closer.

✓ I like communicating with my friends. For example, we sometimes talk about our daily life or sometimes we talk about our common friends, their marriage, and college life, which makes me feel our relationship becomes closer.

原句中“not for example”连接不当，应使用“for example”引出例子，且句子结构混乱，需拆分为两个句子，保证表达清晰。

× we sometimes talk about our daily life or sometimes our talk about our common friends about their marriage and college life which makes me feel our relationship become closer.

✓ we sometimes talk about our daily lives or sometimes we talk about our common friends, their marriage, and college life, which makes me feel our relationship becomes closer.

“daily life”应使用复数形式“daily lives”，因为指的是多个人的日常生活。

× which makes me feel our relationship become closer.

✓ which makes me feel our relationship becomes closer.

主语“relationship”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“becomes”。

× we usually talk about our daily life such as job or umm, clothes or fashion style.

✓ we usually talk about our daily lives such as jobs, clothes, or fashion styles.

“daily life”应为复数“daily lives”，且“job”和“fashion style”应使用复数形式以匹配多样话题。

× Sometimes, you know we are fans of Korean pop *. So we talk about our uh, love celebrities about their music and dance.

✓ Sometimes, you know, we are fans of Korean pop. So we talk about our favorite celebrities, their music, and dance.

“love celebrities”用词不当，应为“favorite celebrities”表示喜欢的明星。

× To be honest, I prefer chats with only one friend because I can pay fully pay full attention on his ideas and thoughts and give her my real and real reflection with serious thinking.

✓ To be honest, I prefer chatting with only one friend because I can fully pay attention to his ideas and thoughts and give him my real reflection with serious thinking.

“prefer chats”应改为“prefer chatting”表示偏好做某事；“pay fully pay full attention on”重复且介词错误，应为“fully pay attention to”；“give her”与前文“his”人称不一致，应统一为“him”。

× I can pay fully pay full attention on his ideas and thoughts

✓ I can fully pay full attention to his ideas and thoughts

动词短语“pay attention”后应接介词“to”，而非“on”。

× my friend live in different city.

✓ my friends live in different cities.

“friend”应为复数“friends”，且“city”应为复数“cities”，表示多个朋友住在不同的城市。

× The only way we can talk about with each other is messaging through the online application such as WeChat.

✓ The only way we can talk to each other is by messaging through online applications such as WeChat.

“talk about with each other”搭配错误，应为“talk to each other”；“messaging through the online application”应改为“by messaging through online applications”更自然。

× we have uh, argue when we are students in junior high.

✓ we argued when we were students in junior high.

“have argue”时态错误，应使用过去式“argued”；“are”应改为过去式“were”，保持时态一致。