Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复和多余的词汇，使表达更流畅自然。

例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends. We usually talk at school and continue our conversations on WeChat after school because it is very convenient.

提案: 回答中有较多犹豫词和语法错误，建议减少填充词，使用更准确的表达，并且句子结构应更清晰。

例: I usually chat with my friends about daily activities, like what we did yesterday or movies we have watched. These topics help us relax and enjoy our conversations.

提案: 回答表达不够连贯，建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，同时注意语法和词汇的准确性。

例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I have many friends. When chatting in a group, I can hear more ideas and interesting opinions.

提案: 句子结构复杂且有语法错误，建议分成两句表达，使用正确的时态和介词，使表达更自然。

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face with my best friends because it is more enjoyable. However, if the person is a stranger or not familiar to me, I prefer chatting on social media.

提案: 回答较为清晰，但有轻微语法错误和填充词，建议去除多余词汇，使用更准确的表达。

例: I rarely argue with my friends because I am patient and don't lose my temper easily. If problems arise, I prefer to talk and find a solution together.

× Yes, I joined chatting with my friend and usually I make a conversation with them in school and after school if we go home, we will uh, chat on the WeChat, which is very convenient.

✓ Yes, I joined chatting with my friends and usually I have conversations with them in school and after school. If we go home, we will, uh, chat on WeChat, which is very convenient.

这里“friend”应为复数形式“friends”，因为后文用“them”指代多个朋友；“make a conversation”应改为“have conversations”，更符合英语习惯。

× Umm, I usually chat with my friend about some, uh, trivial things, just like, uh, what did you do yesterday? Or have you seen some kinds of movies? I think this is really relaxed to do you make a conversation.

✓ Umm, I usually chat with my friends about some, uh, trivial things, just like, uh, what did you do yesterday? Or have you seen some kinds of movies? I think this is really relaxing to have a conversation.

“friend”应为复数“friends”，因为通常和多个朋友聊天；“relaxed”应改为“relaxing”，形容词用法错误；“do you make a conversation”应改为“have a conversation”，表达更自然。

× I have up to a chat with a group of people because umm. I have a lot of friends and I think if you chat with more people you will get more ideas and different interesting things, umm.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because, umm, I have a lot of friends and I think if you chat with more people you will get more ideas and different interesting things, umm.

“have up to a chat”表达不正确，应改为“prefer to chat”；此处主要是表达习惯问题，保持句意通顺。

× If the person who is my best friend, I will enjoy to communicate with her face to face because it will be more fun and if the person who is a stranger or are not familiar with, I will more prefer to chat with her on the social media.

✓ If the person is my best friend, I will enjoy communicating with her face to face because it will be more fun. If the person is a stranger or someone I am not familiar with, I will prefer to chat with her on social media.

“enjoy to communicate”应改为“enjoy communicating”，动词搭配错误；“are not familiar with”缺少主语，应改为“I am not familiar with”；“more prefer”错误，应为“prefer”；“on the social media”应为“on social media”，介词使用错误。

× Really, because I'm a patient person and I won't lose my temper easily. If there are some problems between me and my friends, I will choose to, uh, talk to them and find a solution instead of argue.

✓ Really, because I'm a patient person and I won't lose my temper easily. If there are some problems between me and my friends, I will choose to, uh, talk to them and find a solution instead of arguing.

“instead of argue”中“argue”应使用动名词形式“arguing”，因为“instead of”后面应接动名词。