Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语言不够自然，有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更准确的词汇表达观点。

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and strengthens our friendship. We often talk about gossip and share interesting TikTok videos.

提案: 回答内容较丰富，但句子较长且有重复，缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，并注意句子简洁。

例: I usually chat about fashion, shopping, and celebrities we both like. Sometimes, we also discuss recent events in our friend circle or interesting TikTok videos.

提案: 回答不完整，句子结构混乱，表达不清晰。建议完整表达观点，使用连贯的句子，并避免语法错误。

例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because it feels more private and comfortable. Although group chats offer diverse perspectives, they can sometimes feel overwhelming and awkward.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不流畅，有语法错误。建议完整表达原因，使用连贯的句子，并注意语法准确。

例: I prefer communicating via social media because I feel a bit nervous talking face-to-face. Also, social media allows me to use various apps and share funny memes, which makes conversations more enjoyable.

提案: 回答内容积极，但表达重复且有语法错误。建议避免重复，使用正确的时态和语法，使表达更自然。

例: Sometimes, I have debates with my friends when we have different opinions. However, these discussions strengthen our friendship and help me see things from different perspectives.

× Cos on during chatting I can relax myself and enhance the friendship between me and my friends.

✓ Because during chatting I can relax myself and enhance the friendship between me and my friends.

“Cos”是口语缩写，正式场合应使用完整的“Because”。

× And usually I talk the gossip with my friends and share the TikTok with you and share other interesting.

✓ And usually I talk about gossip with my friends and share TikTok videos and other interesting things.

“talk the gossip”应为“talk about gossip”，动词“talk”后需加介词“about”。“share the TikTok with you”表达不清，应改为“share TikTok videos”。

× I usually chat about fashion, shopping and some celebrities that we both like and sometimes we talk about things which happened near in in our friends circle and sometimes we talk about some interesting TikTok videos.

✓ I usually chat about fashion, shopping and some celebrities that we both like, and sometimes we talk about things which happened recently in our friends circle, and sometimes we talk about some interesting TikTok videos.

“happened near in in our friends circle”表达不正确，应为“happened recently in our friends circle”，使用正确的时间副词和介词。

× Chatting with different people in the group will cause maybe different and varieties of perspectives.

✓ Chatting with different people in the group may cause different and various perspectives.

“cause maybe different and varieties of perspectives”语序和词形错误，应调整为“may cause different and various perspectives”。

× Although it's interesting, I feel maybe a little bit awkward and overwhelming so I prefer to.

✓ Although it's interesting, I feel maybe a little bit awkward and overwhelmed, so I prefer not to.

“overwhelming”应改为“overwhelmed”表示感受；句尾不完整，应补充完整表达。

× I prefer to communicate via social media because I am a little bit nervous when I talk face to face with other people and talking with social media I can use many applications and I can also use some interesting and funny memes which can.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because I am a little bit nervous when I talk face to face with other people, and when talking on social media, I can use many applications and also share some interesting and funny memes.

“talking with social media”应为“talking on social media”，介词使用错误。句子末尾不完整，应补充完整。

× During the debate and argument, we will never broke up and share different perspectives will open my mind.

✓ During the debate and argument, we will never break up, and sharing different perspectives will open my mind.

“broke up”是过去式，句中应使用一般现在时“break up”与“will”搭配。

× During the debate and argument, we will never broke up and share different perspectives will open my mind.

✓ During the debate and argument, we will never break up, and sharing different perspectives will open my mind.

“share different perspectives”主语不明确，应改为“sharing different perspectives”作为主语。