Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免重复表达，如“chatting with my friends”多次出现，且语法错误较多。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并注意语法准确性。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me happy and helps me feel more relaxed.

提案: 回答内容较为混乱，表达不够清晰，且有语法错误。建议使用连贯的句子，明确列举聊天话题，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Usually, I chat with my friends about our daily lives, studies, games, and football players because these topics are quite popular.

提案: 语法错误明显，表达不流畅。建议使用正确的语法结构，清晰表达自己的偏好和原因。

例: I prefer chatting with one person because talking to many people at once makes me feel anxious.

提案: 回答较为完整，但有重复和语法错误。建议简化表达，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's easier to understand others' moods and expressions than through social media.

提案: 回答内容较好，但有小的语法错误和表达不够自然。建议注意冠词使用和句子流畅性。

例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends, but I think it's normal. After arguing, we always apologize to each other and resolve our problems.

× Yeah, I like chatting with my friends because chatting with my friends makes me so happy and it could make me so stability and I think many other reasons for me.

✓ Yeah, I like chatting with my friends because chatting with my friends makes me so happy and it can make me so stable and I think many other reasons for me.

这里的'might'用法不正确，应该用'can'表示能力或可能性；另外，'stability'是名词，句中需要形容词'stable'来修饰。

× Usually I chat with my friends about our daily life and our study game and the football players because I think chat with chat about daily life is so popular.

✓ Usually I chat with my friends about our daily life, our studies, games, and football players because I think chatting about daily life is very popular.

'study game'用法不当，应分开为'studies'和'games'；'chat with chat'重复，应改为'chatting about'；'so popular'改为'very popular'更自然。

× I prefer chat with one people because I think uh chat with the many people I is make me an anxious so.

✓ I prefer to chat with one person because I think chatting with many people makes me anxious.

'one people'错误，'people'是复数，单数应为'person'；'I is'主谓不一致，应为'I am'或省略；'an anxious'错误，'anxious'是形容词，不用冠词。

× I prefer communicate with face to face because if we chat on the social media I can't I can't realize the the other people's mood and the their expression. So I think face to face is the better way.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because if we chat on social media, I can't realize other people's moods and their expressions. So I think face to face is the better way.

'communicate with face to face'中'with'多余，应直接用'communicate face to face'；'on the social media'中'the'不需要；'the other people's mood and the their expression'重复冠词，应去掉。

× After arguing we always apologize to the each other and solve problems.

✓ After arguing, we always apologize to each other and solve problems.

'the each other'错误，'each other'前不加冠词；句首缺少逗号，增加句子清晰度。