Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は内容が豊富ですが、文法の誤りや繰り返しが見られます。また、文の構造を整理し、より自然な表現を使うことで、より効果的な回答になります。例えば、"Philippi"は"Philippines"の誤りであり、"chatting chatting"の繰り返しも避けるべきです。

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. We often talk about our daily lives, such as college experiences and part-time jobs. I also keep in touch with friends who live in the Philippines, which helps me feel connected despite the distance.

提案: 回答に文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多く見られます。例えば、"A recent traditions"は意味が不明瞭で、"topics"は単数形にすべきです。より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけ、接続詞を使って論理的に話をつなげましょう。

例: Since we are third-year college students, I often talk with my friends about job hunting. We discuss how to find companies that suit our interests and share tips on preparing for interviews. Although it is stressful, these topics are very important for all of us.

提案: 文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。例えば、"I can run a lot from different perspective"は意味不明です。より正確な表現と適切な接続詞を使い、具体的な例を明確に述べることが重要です。

例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows me to hear many different perspectives. This broadens my horizon and helps me understand various ideas and thoughts. For example, when I talk with my friends, I often discover new opinions that I hadn't considered before.

提案: 回答が不完全で、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。"condition of"の後に説明がなく、意味が不明瞭です。より明確で簡潔な表現を使い、理由を具体的に述べることが必要です。

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because when we use social media, we cannot see the other person's facial expressions. This makes it harder to understand their feelings and reactions.

提案: 回答に繰り返しや文法の誤りがあり、最後の文は意味が不明瞭です。より自然で明確な表現を使い、理由と自分の行動を具体的に説明しましょう。

例: I usually don't argue with my friends because, as Japanese, we tend to avoid conflicts to maintain good relationships. If I have a different opinion, I try to express it calmly and respectfully.

× Ah yes, I enjoyed chatting chatting with my friends very much.

✓ Ah yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends very much.

The question is in the present tense asking about a current preference, so the answer should also be in the present tense. Using 'enjoyed' (past tense) is incorrect here because it implies a past action rather than a current habit or preference.

× We often talk about our daily lives and share experiences such as the college life or our part time job.

✓ We often talk about our daily lives and share experiences such as college life or our part-time jobs.

'The college life' and 'part time job' are incorrectly singular or with unnecessary articles. 'College life' is an uncountable noun and does not need 'the'. 'Part-time jobs' should be plural to match 'experiences' and the plural subject 'we'.

× I also keep in touch with the friends who live in Philippi, Philippines for study abroad or which help me feel connected despite the distance.

✓ I also keep in touch with friends who live in the Philippines for studying abroad, which helps me feel connected despite the distance.

'Philippi' is incorrect; the correct country name is 'the Philippines'. 'For study abroad' should be 'for studying abroad' to use the gerund form after 'for'. 'Which help' should be 'which helps' to agree with the singular subject 'which' referring to the act of keeping in touch.

× A recent traditions we are third year college students, so I often talk with my friends about job hunting.

✓ Recently, we are third-year college students, so I often talk with my friends about job hunting.

'A recent traditions' is incorrect because 'a' is singular and 'traditions' is plural. The phrase should be 'Recently' to indicate a recent time frame. Also, 'third year' should be hyphenated as 'third-year' when used as an adjective.

× Uh, with my friends.

✓ Uh, I talk with my friends.

The sentence fragment 'Uh, with my friends.' lacks a verb and is incomplete. Adding 'I talk' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× It is a stressful but important topics for all of us.

✓ They are stressful but important topics for all of us.

'It' is singular but refers to 'topics' which is plural. Therefore, the subject and verb should be plural: 'They are' instead of 'It is'.

× I prefer to chat with a group of people because I can run a lot from different perspective.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because I can learn a lot from different perspectives.

'Run a lot' is incorrect; the intended phrase is 'learn a lot'. Also, 'perspective' should be plural 'perspectives' to match 'different'.

× I it's broaden my horizon and help me understand various ideas and, umm, thoughts.

✓ It broadens my horizon and helps me understand various ideas and, umm, thoughts.

'I it's' is incorrect; the correct subject is 'It'. Also, verbs should be in third person singular form 'broadens' and 'helps' to agree with 'It'.

× For example, when I talk with my friends, I often discover new opinion that I hadn't considered before.

✓ For example, when I talk with my friends, I often discover new opinions that I hadn't considered before.

'Opinion' should be plural 'opinions' because 'new' implies multiple ideas and the context suggests more than one opinion.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because if, if we communicate by your social media, we can't see their their face.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because if we communicate via social media, we can't see their faces.

'By your social media' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'via social media'. Also, 'their their face' is repetitive and 'face' should be plural 'faces' to match 'we'.

× So I, I, I think it is understandable to to see their condition of.

✓ So I think it is understandable to see their condition.

The sentence has repeated words 'I, I, I' and 'to to' which are errors. Also, 'condition of' is incomplete; it should be 'condition' alone or followed by an object, but here 'condition' suffices.

× I don't have, I, I don't argue with my friends, uh, since we are Japanese, uh, we, we tend to avoid the arguments with my friends and keep a good relationship with them.

✓ I don't argue with my friends because, as Japanese, we tend to avoid arguments and keep good relationships with them.

The sentence has unnecessary repetitions 'I, I' and 'we, we'. 'Avoid the arguments with my friends' is awkward; better to say 'avoid arguments'. Also, 'keep a good relationship' should be plural 'keep good relationships' to match 'friends'.

× So I if, if I have a different opinion, I don't often talk with that.

✓ So if I have a different opinion, I don't often talk about it.

'If, if' is repeated unnecessarily. 'Talk with that' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'talk about it' referring to the different opinion.