Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng không phù hợp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và dùng từ phù hợp hơn để diễn đạt ý tưởng của mình.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share my experiences and feelings with them.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn, tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'on like kind of curious'. Hãy sử dụng câu có cấu trúc đầy đủ và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên và mạch lạc.

例: I usually chat with my friends about various topics because we are all curious and enjoy learning new things from each other.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều ngắt quãng, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I prefer both, depending on the situation. Sometimes I enjoy deep conversations with one friend, while other times I like chatting with a group.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng câu cuối hơi lặp lại và chưa mạch lạc. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và trôi chảy hơn.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because, as an extrovert, I enjoy sitting and talking with people directly rather than communicating through social media.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không hoàn chỉnh và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời đầy đủ, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên.

例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends when we have different opinions and cannot agree on certain things.

× Yes, I do like chatting with my friend.

✓ Yes, I do like chatting with my friends.

The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because chatting usually involves more than one friend, and the context implies multiple friends.

× It is the best way for me to like bathe myself.

✓ It is the best way for me to relax myself.

The phrase 'like bathe myself' is incorrect and unclear. The intended meaning is likely 'to relax myself' or 'to refresh myself.' 'Bathe' is not appropriate here.

× I like to stop with people to share my own experience and and like to come down my next feelings.

✓ I like to stop by people to share my own experience and also like to calm down my feelings.

The phrase 'stop with people' is incorrect; 'stop by people' or 'stop by to see people' is more appropriate. 'Come down my next feelings' is incorrect; 'calm down my feelings' is the correct expression.

× Like I can talk with them all about.

✓ I can talk with them about anything.

The phrase 'talk with them all about' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'talk with them about' followed by the topic.

× On different things, on different topics, no matter what it is because we are on like kind of curious.

✓ About different things, different topics, no matter what they are because we are kind of curious.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used; 'about' is the correct preposition for topics. Also, 'it is' should be 'they are' to agree with plural 'things' and 'topics.'

× I think that both it depends on, uh, who I talk to sometimes at a deep talk with someone who's having a deep talk with someone is really amazing and but.

✓ I think both are good; it depends on who I talk to. Sometimes having a deep talk with someone is really amazing.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be split into clearer sentences with proper structure and removal of redundant phrases.

× Of course, face to face because I am an extrovert person, so if I have the chance to connect with people interpersonally, at first I would like to sit with them and talk about anything.

✓ Of course, face to face because I am an extrovert person, so if I have the chance to connect with people in person, I would like to sit with them and talk about anything.

The phrase 'connect with people interpersonally' is awkward; 'connect with people in person' is more natural. Also, 'at first' is unnecessary and confusing here.

× Of course face to face rather than communication.

✓ Of course, face to face rather than communicating online.

The phrase 'rather than communication' is incorrect; it should be 'rather than communicating' or 'rather than communicating via social media.'

× Yes, sometimes when I points a few are two different and uh, it makes uh, like we cannot, uh, unify them.

✓ Yes, sometimes when our points are different, it makes it hard for us to agree.

'I points a few are two different' is incorrect. 'Points' should be plural and possessive 'our points,' and the sentence needs restructuring for clarity.