Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding repetition and improving sentence structure. For example, instead of repeating 'friends' and 'connect emotions', say 'I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and strengthen our bond.'

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and strengthens our bond.

提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Use linking words and be specific about topics you discuss. For example, say 'I usually chat about recent experiences, like visiting famous places or buying new clothes, and share these moments with my friends.'

例: I usually chat about recent experiences, like visiting famous places or buying new clothes, and share these moments with my friends.

提案: Your answer is confusing and repetitive. Try to express your preference clearly and use linking words. For example, say 'I prefer chatting with one friend because group conversations can be distracting and make it hard to focus on what I want to say.'

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because group conversations can be distracting and make it hard to focus on what I want to say.

提案: Improve grammar and sentence flow. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, say 'I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to understand people's expressions and experiences better.'

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to understand people's expressions and experiences better.

提案: Make your answer more fluent and specific. Use linking words to list examples. For example, say 'Yes, I sometimes argue with friends about various topics, such as making videos, reading books, and listening to music.'

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends about various topics, such as making videos, reading books, and listening to music.

× I like to chat with my friends which helps me to feel relaxed and to connect emotions with my friends.

✓ I like to chat with my friends, which helps me to feel relaxed and to connect emotionally with them.

The relative pronoun 'which' is used to refer to things, not people. Here, 'which' correctly refers to the action of chatting, so a comma is needed before 'which'. Also, 'connect emotions with my friends' is awkward; 'connect emotionally with them' is clearer and more natural.

× Nothing special, but when I went to the famous place or when I bought a new dress, I immediately checked with my friends about tell them related.

✓ Nothing special, but when I went to a famous place or bought a new dress, I immediately checked with my friends to tell them about it.

The phrase 'checked with my friends about tell them related' is ungrammatical. The correct structure is 'checked with my friends to tell them about it'. Also, 'the famous place' should be 'a famous place' as it is not a specific known place.

× I will prefer to chat only one friend because I don't like so many people for chatting because they disturb so many people, they stop.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I don't like chatting with many people as they disturb me and interrupt.

'I will prefer' is incorrect; 'I prefer' is the correct present tense. 'Only one friend' needs 'with' to indicate the person chatted with. 'So many people' is informal and repetitive; 'many people' is better. The sentence was unclear and needed restructuring for clarity.

× My mind distract uh from telling the things about related to any things.

✓ My mind gets distracted when talking about things related to anything.

The phrase 'My mind distract uh from telling the things about related to any things' is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Distract' is a transitive verb; the correct passive form is 'gets distracted'. 'Telling the things about related to any things' is awkward; 'talking about things related to anything' is clearer.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because it helps to knew about the experience, expression of people, what they want to share with us or what happened to them.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it helps to know about the experiences, expressions of people, what they want to share with us, or what has happened to them.

'Helps to knew' is incorrect; the base form 'know' should be used after 'helps to'. 'Experience' and 'expression' should be plural to match the context. 'What happened to them' should be 'what has happened to them' to indicate relevance to the present.

× So I prefer communicate face to face.

✓ So I prefer to communicate face to face.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to communicate'. The preposition 'to' is missing.

× Yes, I argue with friends for many things.

✓ Yes, I argue with friends about many things.

The verb 'argue' is followed by the preposition 'about' when indicating the subject of the argument, not 'for'.

× For, for example, for making videos, for reading books, for listening music.

✓ For example, about making videos, reading books, and listening to music.

The phrase 'for making videos' is awkward; 'about making videos' is better. Also, 'listening music' should be 'listening to music' as 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object.