Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, use a wider range of vocabulary to express your feelings more naturally.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me express my thoughts and feelings clearly. Moreover, talking to them makes me feel comfortable and relaxed, so I can share anything on my mind without hesitation.

提案: Avoid repeating words like 'usually' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide more specific examples.

例: We generally talk about various topics related to our daily lives, such as what we did during the day or any interesting experiences. For instance, we discuss school activities, weekend plans, or work-related matters.

提案: Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'chat with one person' and improve grammar by saying 'more freely' instead of 'more freely'. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly.

例: Honestly, I prefer chatting with just one friend because it allows me to feel more at ease. Consequently, I can express my thoughts and feelings openly and be myself around that person.

提案: Improve sentence structure and grammar, such as 'convenient for me' and 'other times I just hang out'. Use linking words to contrast your preferences clearly.

例: I like both methods of communication; however, I sometimes prefer social media because it is more convenient for me. On the other hand, I enjoy face-to-face conversations when I hang out with my friends.

提案: Avoid repeating 'arguing' and improve grammar by saying 'problems' instead of 'problem'. Use linking words to explain your reasons more clearly.

例: Honestly, I don't enjoy arguments with my friends because they cause unnecessary problems. Therefore, I prefer to avoid conflicts to maintain good relationships.

× There is no specific subject we usually chat about, but we usually chat about our daily lives like what did we do during the day or if I if we had interesting experiences.

✓ There is no specific subject we usually chat about, but we usually chat about our daily lives like what we did during the day or if we had interesting experiences.

The phrase 'what did we do' is incorrect in this context because it uses the auxiliary 'did' in an indirect question. In indirect questions, the auxiliary 'did' is not used; instead, the verb should be in the past tense form without 'did'. Therefore, 'what did we do' should be corrected to 'what we did'. This correction aligns with proper English grammar rules for indirect questions.

× but other time I just hanging out with them and have a real conversation.

✓ but other times I just hang out with them and have a real conversation.

The phrase 'other time' should be pluralized to 'other times' to indicate multiple occasions. Also, 'I just hanging out' is incorrect because the verb 'hang' should be in the base form 'hang' after 'I just'. The correct form is 'I just hang out'. This correction ensures subject-verb agreement and proper verb form usage in the present tense.

× because it brings us a lot of problem that we don't need.

✓ because it brings us a lot of problems that we don't need.

The word 'problem' should be pluralized to 'problems' because it refers to multiple issues. Using the singular form 'problem' here is incorrect when preceded by 'a lot of', which requires a plural noun. This correction aligns with proper singular and plural noun usage.