Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但句子结构稍显重复，且部分表达不够地道。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并使用更准确的表达方式。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and learn new perspectives. For instance, we often discuss our hobbies and daily experiences, which inspires me a lot.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，语法错误较多，句子结构混乱。建议理清思路，使用简单明了的句子，并注意时态和主谓一致。

例: I usually talk with my friends about my homework and how I have been feeling lately. With my close friends, I also share my thoughts about life and my future plans.

提案: 回答内容相关，但存在语法错误和重复表达。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because they know me better than a group. This way, I can share my true thoughts and ask for advice about my future plans.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇，表达不够简洁。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see people's smiles and emotions clearly, which makes our interaction deeper. On social media, we only see virtual images, not real expressions.

提案: 回答表达不够流畅，语法和用词错误较多。建议使用更清晰的句子结构，表达观点时注意逻辑连贯。

例: Yes, everyone has differences, so I sometimes argue with my friends. However, we discuss the topic deeply and try to understand each other's opinions, eventually reaching an agreement.

× it not only makes me feel satisfied but also helps me get new sides from my friend.

✓ it not only makes me feel satisfied but also helps me get new sides from my friends.

这里的 friend 应该用复数形式 friends，因为前文提到的是和多个朋友聊天，表示多个朋友的观点。

× I often learn useful things and get inspired by the experiences.

✓ I often learn useful things and get inspired by the experiences.

此句无明显单复数错误，保持原句。

× During my daytime, I really chat with my friend about my homework and how I feel during these days.

✓ During my daytime, I really chat with my friends about my homework and how I feel during these days.

这里的 friend 应该用复数形式 friends，因为通常会和多个朋友交流。

× And when I talked with my deep friend and I will talk to, I will talk with my perspective of the life or what I will do in the future.

✓ And when I talk with my close friend, I will talk about my perspective on life or what I will do in the future.

这里的 friend 应该用单数形式 close friend，且句子结构需要调整以表达清楚。

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because compared to the group of people, a friend know know me better and he knows me deeper than the group of people.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because compared to a group of people, a friend knows me better and he knows me more deeply than a group of people.

这里的 group 应该用单数形式 a group，且动词 know 应该用第三人称单数形式 knows，副词用 more deeply。

× a friend know know me better and he knows me deeper than the group of people.

✓ a friend knows me better and he knows me more deeply than the group of people.

主语是第三人称单数 friend，动词 know 应该加 s 变为 knows。

× And I can talk with him my real thought and then I can ask him for his advice for my future planning.

✓ And I can talk to him about my real thoughts and then I can ask him for his advice on my future planning.

动词 talk 后应接介词 to，表达“和某人交谈”；thought 应用复数形式 thoughts；ask advice 后应接介词 on。

× I prefer to communicate the face to face because when I communicate with people face to face I can learn what they are smiling at and I can see the emotions on their face and have more deep interaction with the in.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because when I communicate with people face to face, I can learn what they are smiling at, and I can see the emotions on their face and have deeper interaction with them.

communicate 后不加定冠词 the；短语 face to face 不加 the；最后的 with the in 应改为 with them。

× In social media we we can only see the virtual image instead of the real real smile.

✓ On social media, we can only see the virtual image instead of the real smile.

介词应为 on social media；去掉重复的 we 和 real。

× Yes everyone, they have difference with each other and I argue with friends in some time but we will talk with the topic deeply and then learn what each of us think and agree with each other at last.

✓ Yes, everyone has differences with each other, and I argue with friends sometimes, but we will talk about the topic deeply and then learn what each of us thinks and agree with each other at last.

everyone 是单数，动词用 has；difference 应用复数 differences；in some time 应改为 sometimes；talk with the topic 应改为 talk about the topic；each of us 后动词用 thinks。