Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为冗长且重复，缺乏连贯的逻辑结构。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows us to share our thoughts and experiences. We often spend time together discussing various topics, which strengthens our friendship.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免重复，并用连接词使内容连贯。

例: We usually talk about our daily lives, study programs, and emotional experiences. Moreover, we support each other to overcome any difficulties we face.

提案: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法错误和重复。建议注意主谓一致，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更自然。

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because I don't have many friends around me. This way, I can share my feelings and experiences more deeply with that person.

提案: 回答较好，但句子结构稍显复杂且有小错误。建议简化句子结构，注意冠词和复数形式的使用，使表达更自然。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because, although social media allows chatting anytime and anywhere, some things are better exchanged in person.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够流畅的问题。建议注意时态和句子结构，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Sometimes we argue, but if we come up with a solution, we discuss it calmly. However, occasional problems between us can lead to arguments.

× we shared our thoughts and our lives together to each other

✓ we share our thoughts and our lives with each other

这里描述的是习惯性动作，应该使用一般现在时，而不是过去时。

× we shared our thoughts and our lives together to each other

✓ we share our thoughts and our lives with each other

动词share后面应接介词with，而不是to。

× we gather together to spend a lot of time chatting

✓ we gather together to spend a lot of time chatting

此句无明显介词错误，保持原句。

× like their their emotion, emotional experiences

✓ like their emotions, emotional experiences

emotion应使用复数形式emotions，且重复了their。

× we will give give a hand with each other

✓ we will give a hand to each other

动词短语是give a hand to someone，介词应为to。

× so that we can get out of the trouble we faced with

✓ so that we can get out of the trouble we face

描述现在或习惯性情况，应该用一般现在时face，且短语中不需要with。

× I am not a person who have a lot of friends surrounding me

✓ I am not a person who has a lot of friends surrounding me

关系代词who指代单数person，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数has。

× so that we can make deep, deeply conversation

✓ so that we can have a deep conversation

conversation是名词，前面应使用形容词deep修饰，而非副词deeply。

× I prefer communicate face to face

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face

动词prefer后应接不定式to communicate。

× although via social media we can chat with each other despite the place and the time

✓ although via social media we can chat with each other regardless of the place and the time

despite后面应接名词短语，表达“不管……”，此处用regardless of更合适。

× there are something we need to exchange through chatting in person

✓ there are some things we need to exchange through chatting in person

something是不可数或单数，前面用are不匹配，应改为复数some things。

× if we can came up with an idea which can solve the problem we are arguing about

✓ if we can come up with an idea which can solve the problem we are arguing about

情态动词can后应接动词原形come，而非过去式came。