Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Javobingizda grammatik xatolar va so'z tanlashdagi noaniqliklarni tuzatishingiz kerak. Masalan, "I like hang out my friends" o'rniga "I like hanging out with my friends" deyish yaxshiroq. Shuningdek, gaplaringizni qisqaroq va aniqroq qilib, ortiqcha so'zlardan qoching.

例: Yes, I enjoy hanging out with my friends because it is interesting and enjoyable. We share our emotions and talk about our future plans and dreams. It is both exciting and relaxing for me.

提案: Javobingizda so'z tanlash va gap tuzilmasida xatolar bor. Masalan, "deposition" so'zi noto'g'ri ishlatilgan, uning o'rniga "mood" yetarli. Gaplaringizni yanada aniqroq va mantiqiy bog'langan qilib ifodalashga harakat qiling.

例: It depends on our mood. Usually, we talk about our future plans and daily life. Sometimes, we also discuss our families, work, and studies.

提案: Javobingiz tushunarsiz va grammatik jihatdan noto'g'ri. To'liq va aniq gaplar tuzishga harakat qiling. Masalan, "I prefer chatting with one friend because I can share my feelings without distractions." kabi oddiy va aniq gaplar ishlating.

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because I can share my feelings without any noise or distractions. It feels more comfortable and personal.

提案: Javobingiz yaxshi, lekin gaplarni yanada silliq va grammatik jihatdan to'g'ri qilish kerak. Masalan, "helps us in understand" o'rniga "helps us understand" deyish kerak. Shuningdek, gaplarni qisqaroq qilib, mantiqiy bog'lash uchun bog'lovchi so'zlardan foydalaning.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because we can see each other's facial expressions and emotions. This helps us understand each other more deeply, and we can also read body language during the conversation.

提案: Javobingiz to'liq emas va ko'p to'xtalishlar bor. To'liq va aniq gaplar tuzishga harakat qiling. Masalan, "Yes, sometimes we argue when we get hurt, but we always make up afterwards." kabi oddiy va aniq gaplar ishlating.

例: Yes, sometimes we argue when we get hurt, but we always make up afterwards.

× I like hang out my friends because it is very interesting and enjoyable.

✓ I like hanging out with my friends because it is very interesting and enjoyable.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'hanging' when expressing enjoyment of an activity. Also, the preposition 'with' is needed after 'hang out' to indicate the people involved.

× I like hang out my friends because it is very interesting and enjoyable.

✓ I like hanging out with my friends because it is very interesting and enjoyable.

The phrase 'hang out' requires the preposition 'with' to correctly indicate the people you spend time with.

× Also, it is a very exciting and relaxing for me.

✓ Also, it is very exciting and relaxing for me.

The article 'a' is incorrect before uncountable adjectives 'exciting' and 'relaxing' used here; they should be used without 'a'.

× It depends on our mood and deposition.

✓ It depends on our mood and disposition.

The word 'deposition' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'disposition', meaning a person's usual mood or temperament.

× Most of the time we chat about our certain future plans and our daily life.

✓ Most of the time we chat about our certain future plans and our daily lives.

The phrase 'daily life' should be pluralized to 'daily lives' when referring to multiple people's everyday experiences.

× And other topics maybe our families, our works, our studies, and others.

✓ And other topics may be our families, our work, our studies, and others.

The modal verb 'maybe' is incorrect here; it should be 'may be'. Also, 'works' is usually uncountable when referring to employment or tasks, so 'work' is correct.

× Comfortable and because I can share all my emotions and my feelings with her and without any noise or any visitor distribution so and with other people it is.

✓ I prefer chatting with one friend because I can share all my emotions and feelings with her without any noise or distractions, which is not possible with other people.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clear structure. It needs to be rephrased for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× In person we can see each other's facial expressions and emotions which helps us in understand each other more deeply and and during conversation being able to read the body language.

✓ In person, we can see each other's facial expressions and emotions, which helps us understand each other more deeply and, during conversation, be able to read body language.

The phrase 'helps us in understand' is incorrect; it should be 'helps us understand'. Also, commas are needed for clarity, and 'being able' should be 'be able'.

× Yes, of course it happens sometimes when we. Hurt, uh, we argue with friends, uh, but after uh.

✓ Yes, of course it sometimes happens that we get hurt and argue with friends, but afterwards we make up.

The original sentence is incomplete and fragmented. It needs to be completed and structured properly to convey the intended meaning.