Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，建议注意动词形式和句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax when I am tired or bored. It makes me feel happy.

提案: 回答缺少完整句子和连接词，建议用完整句子回答并适当使用连接词，使内容更连贯。

例: We usually chat about topics such as games, computer devices, travel, photography, and fashion.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，建议用完整句子表达偏好，并解释原因，避免使用口语化或不准确的词汇。

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it feels more comfortable and personal. If I feel bored, I can easily find that friend to talk to.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和不清晰的表达，建议用完整句子表达偏好，并解释原因，避免使用不准确的词汇。

例: I prefer to communicate via social media because I am very shy. Talking face-to-face makes me nervous, so I feel more comfortable online.

提案: 回答不连贯且语法错误较多，建议用完整句子表达观点，并举具体例子说明。

例: Yes, sometimes we argue because we have different opinions. For example, we might disagree about which movie to watch.

× Yes, I really enjoying when chatting with my friend friends because it's help, it helps me relax when I'm tired or boring.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax when I'm tired or bored.

动词 enjoy 后面应接动名词形式（-ing），而不是现在分词 enjoying。'friend friends' 是重复，应改为复数 friends。'it's help' 应为第三人称单数形式 helps。'boring' 用来形容事物，描述人的状态应使用过去分词 bored。

× Yes, I really enjoying when chatting with my friend friends because it's help, it helps me relax when I'm tired or boring.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax when I'm tired or bored.

'friend friends' 中重复使用 friend，应使用复数形式 friends。

× Yes, I really enjoying when chatting with my friend friends because it's help, it helps me relax when I'm tired or boring.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax when I'm tired or bored.

主语 it 是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加 -s，故应为 helps。

× Yes, I really enjoying when chatting with my friend friends because it's help, it helps me relax when I'm tired or boring.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax when I'm tired or bored.

形容词 boring 用来描述事物，描述人的感受时应使用过去分词 bored。

× Such as some games, computer devices, travel, photograph outfits, etcetera.

✓ We usually chat about things such as games, computer devices, travel, photography, outfits, etc.

句子缺少主语和谓语，导致结构不完整，应补充完整句子。

× I prefer jamming with only one friends because I think it's nuts.

✓ I prefer jamming with only one friend because I think it's nuts.

'one' 后应接单数名词，故 friends 应改为 friend。

× If I am boring, I can. Look for him.

✓ If I am bored, I can look for him.

句子断裂，缺少连贯性，应合并为完整句子。

× If I am boring, I can. Look for him.

✓ If I am bored, I can look for him.

'boring' 用来形容事物，描述人的感受应使用过去分词 bored。

× If I face to face I think I don't think so.

✓ If I face someone face-to-face, I don't think so.

'face to face' 应用作副词短语，前面需加动词和宾语，且应连写为 face-to-face。

× If I face to face I think I don't think so.

✓ If I face someone face-to-face, I don't think so.

句子缺少宾语，导致表达不完整，应补充宾语。

× If I face to face I think I don't think so.

✓ If I face someone face-to-face, I don't think so.

缺少宾语，需用代词或名词补充。

× I like royal social.

✓ I like social media.

'royal social' 词组不合适，可能是误用，应改为 social media（社交媒体）。

× Sure. For example we view is different. We probably, probably, probably. Will argue yeah.

✓ Sure. For example, if our views are different, we will probably argue.

句子断裂且重复，应合并为完整句子，调整词序和时态。

× Sure. For example we view is different. We probably, probably, probably. Will argue yeah.

✓ Sure. For example, if our views are different, we will probably argue.

'we view' 应为复数形式 views，表示多种观点。

× Sure. For example we view is different. We probably, probably, probably. Will argue yeah.

✓ Sure. For example, if our views are different, we will probably argue.

描述一般事实时，主句应使用一般现在时，条件句中视情况使用。