Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は自然ですが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「even we hadn't met face to face」は「even if we haven't met face to face」や「even when we haven't met face to face」とする方が自然です。また、「social media chatting is so usable」は不自然で、「social media chatting is very convenient」などの表現が適切です。より明確で流暢な表現を心がけましょう。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it allows me to stay connected even when we haven't met face to face. Social media chatting is very convenient for keeping in touch.

提案: 回答は内容が伝わりますが、文法ミスや冗長な表現があります。例えば、「school lives」は「school life」が正しいです。また、「when I find find something interesting videos or YouTube」は不自然で、「when I find interesting videos on YouTube」などとすると良いでしょう。文を簡潔にし、接続詞を使って論理的に繋げる練習をしましょう。

例: I usually chat with my friends about school life and homework. Also, when I find interesting videos on YouTube, I recommend and share them with my friends, and we talk about them.

提案: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。例えば、「I prefer more chatting with one-on-one app」は「I prefer chatting one-on-one」や「I prefer one-on-one chats」が自然です。また、「a group of people chatting is sometimes causes misunderstanding」は「group chats sometimes cause misunderstandings」と修正しましょう。文を短くし、正しい文法を使う練習が必要です。

例: I prefer chatting one-on-one rather than in a group because group chats can sometimes cause misunderstandings. Also, I feel nervous when I can't speak in a group.

提案: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法と表現に改善の余地があります。「social media chatting is sometimes can cause misunderstandings」は「social media chatting can sometimes cause misunderstandings」と修正し、「I can see opposite's face」は「I can see the other person's face」が自然です。より流暢で正確な表現を心がけましょう。

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because social media chatting can sometimes cause misunderstandings. Also, I can see the other person's face during face-to-face communication.

提案: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭な部分があります。「I have never argue」は「I have never argued」が正しいです。また、「my word has a responsibility」は不自然で、「I think my words carry responsibility」などと表現すると良いでしょう。内容を明確にし、簡潔に話す練習が必要です。

例: I have never argued with my friends. I believe that my words carry responsibility, and sometimes opinions differ, but I always try to have a good conversation with them.

× I can communicate with my friends even we hadn't met face to face.

✓ I can communicate with my friends even if we haven't met face to face.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'hadn't met' (past perfect) where present perfect 'haven't met' is appropriate to indicate an action that has not occurred up to now but is relevant to the present. 日本語の説明: 過去完了形（hadn't met）は過去のある時点より前の出来事を表すため、この文脈では現在完了形（haven't met）が適切です。

× So social media chatting is so usable.

✓ So social media chatting is very useful.

The adjective 'usable' is not appropriate here; 'useful' better expresses the intended meaning of being beneficial or helpful. 日本語の説明: 'usable'は『使用可能な』という意味で、ここでは『役に立つ』を意味する'useful'が適切です。

× I usually chat with my friends about school lives and homework and also when I find find something interesting videos or YouTube I recommend and share with my friends and talks about it.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about school life and homework, and also when I find interesting videos or YouTube content, I recommend and share them with my friends and talk about it.

The plural 'lives' is incorrect; 'life' is uncountable here. Also, 'talks' should be 'talk' to agree with the subject 'I'. 日本語の説明: 'school lives'は誤りで、不可算名詞の'school life'が正しいです。また、主語'I'に対して動詞は単数形'talks'ではなく'talk'を使います。

× I prefer more chatting with one-on-one app than chat with a group of people because a group of people chatting is sometimes causes misunderstanding and it's sometimes get nervous when they can't talk.

✓ I prefer chatting one-on-one through an app rather than chatting with a group of people because group chats sometimes cause misunderstandings and people sometimes get nervous when they can't talk.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'prefer more chatting' is awkward, 'is sometimes causes' is incorrect (should be 'sometimes cause'), and 'it's sometimes get nervous' should be 'people sometimes get nervous'. 日本語の説明: 'prefer more chatting'は不自然で、'prefer chatting'が適切です。'is sometimes causes'は文法的に誤りで、'sometimes cause'が正しいです。また、'it's sometimes get nervous'は主語と動詞の一致が取れていません。

× I prefer to communicate face to face because uh social media chatting is sometimes can cause misunderstandings and I can see opposite's face with face to face communication.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because social media chatting can sometimes cause misunderstandings and I can see the other person's face with face-to-face communication.

The phrase 'is sometimes can cause' is incorrect; modal verbs like 'can' should not be combined with 'is'. Also, 'opposite's face' is incorrect; 'the other person's face' is appropriate. 日本語の説明: 'is sometimes can cause'は二重助動詞で誤りです。また、'opposite's face'は不自然で、'the other person's face'が正しい表現です。

× I have never argue with my friend and I am thinking that uh, my word has a responsibility and it sometimes separates the opinions but I I have to make conversation with my friend.

✓ I have never argued with my friend and I think that my words have responsibility and sometimes cause differences in opinions, but I have to have conversations with my friend.

'have never argue' should be 'have never argued' (past participle). 'I am thinking' is better as 'I think' for habitual thoughts. 'my word has a responsibility' is awkward; 'my words have responsibility' is better. 'separates the opinions' should be 'cause differences in opinions'. 'make conversation' should be 'have conversations'. 日本語の説明: 'have never argue'は現在完了形における過去分詞形が必要で、'argued'が正しいです。その他、自然な表現に修正しました。