Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢和朋友聊天的原因，但语言不够自然，存在语法错误和重复词汇。建议简化句子结构，避免语气词，使用更准确的表达方式。

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share my worries with them. Talking to friends makes me feel happier and less stressed.

提案: 回答内容不够清晰，表达含糊且有语法错误。建议明确主题，使用连贯的句子，并具体说明聊天内容。

例: I usually talk about relationships with my friends because I have many questions about love and sometimes I don't understand people's behavior.

提案: 回答不够连贯，表达不清楚，且有语法错误。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达观点，并避免重复和语气词。

例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I can get different opinions instead of just one. This helps me see things from various perspectives.

提案: 回答表达了偏好，但语言不够流畅，有语法和用词错误。建议简化句子，使用正确的表达方式，并增加连贯性。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can hug my friend when I'm sad and maintain eye contact, which helps me understand their feelings better.

提案: 回答不够清晰，表达含糊且有语法错误。建议直接回答问题，使用完整句子，并具体说明情况。

例: I rarely argue with my friends because I believe they care about me. I try to avoid making them angry or sad, and I often help them when needed.

× Yes, I very like chatting with friends because I think it can make me relax and I can talk to my friend some uh, I scared uh, things and uh, let me sad things. I can be umm, happy person.

✓ Yes, I really like chatting with friends because I think it can help me relax and I can talk to my friends about some, uh, scary things and, uh, sad things. I can be, umm, a happy person.

动词like后面应使用动名词形式chatting，且副词very用法错误，应改为really。friend应为复数friends，因为是泛指朋友。句中表达不清楚的地方进行了合理调整。

× Yes, I very like chatting with friends because I think it can make me relax and I can talk to my friend some uh, I scared uh, things and uh, let me sad things. I can be umm, happy person.

✓ Yes, I really like chatting with friends because I think it can help me relax and I can talk to my friends about some, uh, scary things and, uh, sad things. I can be, umm, a happy person.

friend应为复数friends，因为这里指的是多个朋友。

× I can talk to my friend some uh, I scared uh, things and uh, let me sad things.

✓ I can talk to my friends about some, uh, scary things and, uh, sad things.

动词talk后面应接介词about来引出谈论的内容。

× I can be umm, happy person.

✓ I can be, umm, a happy person.

单数可数名词前需要冠词a或an。

× I usually chat about some boyfriend or some relationship with my friends because I have a lot of love questions and I I can't realize some people do something to me.

✓ I usually chat about boyfriends or relationships with my friends because I have a lot of love questions and I can't understand why some people do things to me.

chat about后面应接复数名词boyfriends和relationships，且realize用法不当，应改为understand。

× I usually chat about some boyfriend or some relationship with my friends because I have a lot of love questions and I I can't realize some people do something to me.

✓ I usually chat about boyfriends or relationships with my friends because I have a lot of love questions and I can't understand why some people do things to me.

boyfriend和relationship应使用复数形式，表示泛指。

× I I can't realize some people do something to me.

✓ I can't understand why some people do things to me.

realize用法不当，应改为understand，且表达更自然。

× I prefer chat with group of people because I think I could receive a lot of advances, not only one, because, uh, if, uh, anyone tell me, uh, their advance.

✓ I prefer chatting with a group of people because I think I could receive a lot of advice, not just from one person, because, uh, if, uh, anyone tells me, uh, their advice.

prefer后应接动名词形式chatting。group前应加冠词a。advances用词错误，应为advice。tell主语单数时动词应加s。

× I prefer chat with group of people because I think I could receive a lot of advances, not only one, because, uh, if, uh, anyone tell me, uh, their advance.

✓ I prefer chatting with a group of people because I think I could receive a lot of advice, not just from one person, because, uh, if, uh, anyone tells me, uh, their advice.

动词prefer后接动名词形式，且介词with后应加冠词a。

× if, uh, anyone tell me, uh, their advance.

✓ if, uh, anyone tells me, uh, their advice.

主语anyone为第三人称单数，谓语动词tell应加s变为tells。

× I think I could receive a lot of advances, not only one,

✓ I think I could receive a lot of advice, not just from one person,

advances用法错误，正确表达应为advice，且not only one表达不完整，应改为not just from one person。

× I prefer to communicate face to face because if I think I'm sad I can hug my friend and we have the eye contact each other.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because if I feel sad I can hug my friend and we have eye contact with each other.

feel sad比think I'm sad更自然；eye contact后应加介词with；each other前不加冠词the。

× I can realize how how what she speak.

✓ I can understand what she is saying.

realize用法不当，应改为understand；动词speak应使用现在进行时is saying以表达正在说的话。

× Uh, almost I can't do it with my friends because my, I think my friends, uh, love me so I can't do it to my friends.

✓ Uh, I almost never argue with my friends because I think my friends, uh, love me so I can't do that to my friends.

can't do it表达不清，应改为can't do that；almost应放在句中更自然。

× I can't make their mad and sad to me.

✓ I can't make them mad or sad at me.

their应为宾格them；表达情绪时用make sb mad/sad；后面应使用介词at me。