Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps me stay connected. For example, we often share stories about our daily lives and support each other when we face problems.

提案: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể về chủ đề bạn thường nói chuyện để câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

例: I usually chat with my friends about problems we face in our daily lives, such as work or school issues.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích lý do và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, mạch lạc.

例: I prefer to chat with only one friend because I find it easier to focus and have a meaningful conversation.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ nghĩa và không mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, nêu quan điểm và giải thích lý do cụ thể.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it feels more personal, but I also use social media to keep in touch when we are far apart.

提案: Câu trả lời quá ngắn và không cung cấp thông tin bổ sung. Bạn nên mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách giải thích tần suất hoặc lý do bạn có thể tranh luận với bạn bè.

例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions, but we always try to resolve our disagreements quickly.

× Yes, I like chatting friends because it helps me stay connected and say it's the indulging story we often talk about our daily lives and support it our other when we face problem is the right way to.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends because it helps me stay connected and share the interesting stories. We often talk about our daily lives and support each other when we face problems; this is the right way to do so.

The phrase 'chatting friends' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'chatting with friends'. Also, 'say it's the indulging story' is unclear and should be 'share the interesting stories'. 'Support it our other' should be 'support each other'. 'Face problem' should be plural 'face problems'. These preposition and word choice errors affect clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I I usually tell my friend either some problem, some problem around our life.

✓ I usually tell my friends about some problems around our lives.

The singular 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'some problems'. Also, 'some problem' should be plural 'some problems' to indicate multiple issues. 'Our life' should be plural 'our lives' to refer to multiple people's experiences.

× I would to tell with a living one friend, 'cause I I don't think I can. I like some little rule on people. And I think you know how be to tell.

✓ I would like to talk with one close friend because I don't think I can with many people. I prefer a small group of people, and I think you know how to talk.

The phrase 'would to tell with a living one friend' is incorrect; it should be 'would like to talk with one close friend'. 'Some little rule on people' is unclear and corrected to 'a small group of people'. 'How be to tell' is corrected to 'how to talk'. Prepositions and word choices were incorrect, affecting meaning and grammar.

× Oppo isn't isn't so OK I but I'm able to via social media in peaceful new things.

✓ I don't prefer face-to-face communication, but I'm able to learn new things via social media peacefully.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect prepositions and word order. 'Oppo isn't isn't so OK' is corrected to 'I don't prefer face-to-face communication'. 'I'm able to via social media in peaceful new things' is corrected to 'I'm able to learn new things via social media peacefully'. Proper prepositions and word order improve clarity.