Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免重复表达相同意思，如“it makes me very happy”和“I'm very happy”重复，建议用更丰富的表达来说明原因。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share interesting experiences, which always lifts my mood.

提案: 回答不够完整且语法不清晰，建议用完整句子表达，并具体说明聊天内容。

例: We usually chat about various topics on WeChat, such as local news, our studies, and sometimes our hobbies.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议用简洁且正确的句子表达偏好，并避免无关内容。

例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I enjoy meeting new friends and having lively conversations.

提案: 表达中有语法错误和用词不当，如“check more deeper”和“good eyes communication”，建议使用更自然的表达。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows us to understand each other better through eye contact and body language.

提案: 回答中断断续续且语法错误较多，建议用完整句子表达观点，避免重复和犹豫词。

例: No, I hardly ever argue with my friends because I value peace and harmony in our relationships.

× This makes me more happier.

✓ This makes me happier.

'more happier' 是错误的比较级表达，'happier' 已经是比较级，不需要加 'more'。应使用单一比较级形式。

× I prefer to communicate face to face because we can check more deeper and we have a good eyes communication.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because we can understand more deeply and we have good eye contact.

'check more deeper' 语法错误，'deeper' 是比较级，不能和 'more' 连用；'eyes communication' 用词不当，正确表达是 'eye contact'。

× No, I umm, I'm don't, umm, I I. I hardly ever argue with friends I I love peace and love.

✓ No, I don't. I hardly ever argue with friends. I love peace and love.

句中 'I'm don't' 是错误的助动词和主语搭配，且重复 'I I'，应简化为正确的否定句 'I don't' 并去除多余重复。