Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ không phù hợp như "trust" và cấu trúc câu cần rõ ràng hơn. Hãy cố gắng nói tự nhiên, mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because I often use my smartphone to connect with them through social media. It helps me reduce stress and makes me feel happy.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng để câu trả lời rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc và tránh lỗi sai như "obtains a discuss". Nội dung nên cụ thể và có ví dụ rõ ràng.

例: I usually chat with my friends about a variety of topics such as daily life, habits, and future plans. For example, we often discuss movies we have recently watched, and I share my thoughts about life with them.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều/số ít và cách dùng từ chính xác. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi như "chasing" thay vì "chatting". Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc và ý nghĩa rõ ràng.

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows for a more meaningful conversation. When talking one-on-one, it's easier to focus on the other person's feelings and build a stronger connection.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu liên kết câu. Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn và sửa các lỗi như "prefer communicate" thành "prefer to communicate". Nội dung nên rõ ràng và cụ thể hơn.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows more effective interactions. When talking in person, I can read body language, which helps me understand the other person better than through social media.

提案: Bạn đã hiểu sai câu hỏi và trả lời không phù hợp. Hãy chú ý trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi. Ngoài ra, cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng, tránh lỗi như "agree" thay vì "argue" và "obtain a Guild" không đúng. Hãy trả lời rõ ràng, cụ thể và đúng chủ đề.

例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions about school topics. However, we usually discuss calmly and find solutions together, like helping each other with difficult homework.

× I often use my smartphone to umm trust for social medias and just with my friends.

✓ I often use my smartphone to chat on social media and just with my friends.

The verb 'trust' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'chat' which requires the base form after 'to'. Also, 'social medias' should be 'social media' as it is an uncountable noun.

× I think it's helped me reduce stress and I feel very happy to with them.

✓ I think it has helped me reduce stress and I feel very happy to be with them.

The phrase 'to with them' is incomplete; it should be 'to be with them' to make grammatical sense. Also, 'it's helped' is better expressed as 'it has helped' for clarity.

× I usually chat with my friends about variety of topic check as about daily life, about habit and future plans.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about a variety of topics such as daily life, habits, and future plans.

'Variety' requires the article 'a' and 'topic' should be plural 'topics'. 'Check as' is incorrect and should be 'such as'. 'Habit' should be plural 'habits' to match the list.

× For example, we obtains a discuss movie we have recently watched and I share my friends about life.

✓ For example, we discuss movies we have recently watched and I share with my friends about life.

'Obtains a discuss' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'discuss' in base form. 'Movies' should be plural. 'Share my friends' needs the preposition 'with' to be correct.

× I think I prefer chasing with only one friends because it allow for people and more meaningful conversation.

✓ I think I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows for a more meaningful conversation.

'Chasing' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'chatting'. 'Friends' should be singular 'friend' after 'only one'. 'Allow' should be 'allows' to agree with singular subject. 'For people' is unnecessary and 'a' is needed before 'more meaningful conversation'.

× When talking one-on-one, it's easier to focus on other person's feelings and those which have a stronger connection.

✓ When talking one-on-one, it's easier to focus on the other person's feelings and those who have a stronger connection.

'Other person' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Those which' should be 'those who' when referring to people.

× I think I prefer communicate face to face because I think its allow me effective interactions and when talking person I can read body language it help me understand the other persons better like than social media.

✓ I think I prefer communicating face to face because I think it allows me effective interactions and when talking to a person I can read body language which helps me understand the other person better than social media.

'Prefer communicate' should be 'prefer communicating'. 'Its' should be 'it'. 'Allow' should be 'allows' to agree with singular subject. 'Talking person' needs preposition 'to a person'. 'It help' should be 'which helps'. 'Persons' should be singular 'person'. 'Like than' is incorrect; 'better than' is correct.

× Yes, I often agree with my friends.

✓ Yes, I often argue with my friends.

The student likely meant 'argue' instead of 'agree' as the question is about arguing. 'Agree' is the opposite of 'argue' and changes the meaning.

× For example, when we have any topic about school or for example have a difficult homework, we obtain a Guild and find a solution to do that exercise.

✓ For example, when we have any topic about school or have difficult homework, we form a group and find a solution to do that exercise.

'Obtain a Guild' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'form a group'. 'Have a difficult homework' should be 'have difficult homework' as 'homework' is uncountable. 'For example' is repeated unnecessarily.