Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like chatting with friends?
受験者
Yes, I do like chatting with friends because they are very important to me. My friends are very supportive and I love them so much.
試験官
What do you usually chat about with friends?
受験者
We usually talk about sports. You know, I love soccer and my favorite team is Corinthians. It's a Brazilian team, soccer team, and I have many friends which supports this team in Brazil, so we love talking about it.
試験官
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
受験者
I prefer chatting with only one friend because you know, I'm a shy person and I don't like to share my opinions or to expose myself to other people in a group of people and that's why I prefer talking only to only one person.
試験官
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
受験者
I prefer the both, you know, because I have friends who live in the countryside and I have no opportunity to talk to them in person, so that's why I prefer the both ways.
試験官
Do you argue with friends?
受験者
Sometimes, because sometimes we have some discussions about our different opinions and other kind of subjects, but the most of the time I speak to them, I talk to them friendly.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
スコア: 75.0提案: Sua resposta é clara e direta, mas pode ser mais natural e eficaz se evitar repetições e usar uma estrutura mais variada. Tente usar conectores para ligar as ideias e enriquecer a resposta.
例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because they provide me with great support and companionship, which means a lot to me.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
スコア: 80.0提案: Sua resposta é boa, mas pode ser mais natural se evitar repetições e usar palavras mais precisas. Além disso, usar conectores ajuda a tornar a resposta mais fluida.
例: We usually chat about sports, especially soccer. Since I support Corinthians, a popular Brazilian team, my friends and I often discuss recent matches and players.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
スコア: 70.0提案: Sua resposta é honesta, mas pode ser mais concisa e natural. Evite repetições e use conectores para melhorar a coesão.
例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I'm quite shy and feel more comfortable sharing my thoughts in a one-on-one conversation.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
スコア: 65.0提案: Sua resposta tem erros gramaticais e é um pouco confusa. Tente ser mais claro e usar estruturas corretas, além de evitar expressões informais como 'you know'.
例: I prefer both face-to-face communication and social media because some of my friends live far away, so I use social media to stay in touch with them.
Do you argue with friends?
スコア: 70.0提案: Sua resposta é repetitiva e pode ser mais natural se usar sinônimos e estruturas variadas. Use conectores para ligar as ideias de forma mais fluida.
例: Occasionally, my friends and I have disagreements due to differing opinions, but usually, we communicate in a friendly and respectful manner.
文法
× I have many friends which supports this team in Brazil, so we love talking about it.
✓ I have many friends who support this team in Brazil, so we love talking about it.
The relative pronoun 'which' is incorrectly used for people; 'who' should be used instead. Also, 'supports' should be 'support' to agree with the plural subject 'friends'.
× I prefer talking only to only one person.
✓ I prefer talking only to one person.
The phrase 'only to only one person' is redundant; 'only to one person' is sufficient and grammatically correct.
× I prefer the both, you know, because I have friends who live in the countryside and I have no opportunity to talk to them in person, so that's why I prefer the both ways.
✓ I prefer both, you know, because I have friends who live in the countryside and I have no opportunity to talk to them in person, so that's why I prefer both ways.
The phrase 'the both' is incorrect; 'both' should be used without the definite article 'the' when referring to two things.
× but the most of the time I speak to them, I talk to them friendly.
✓ but most of the time I speak to them, I talk to them friendly.
The phrase 'the most of the time' is incorrect; it should be 'most of the time' without the definite article 'the'.
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