Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中出现了不恰当的自我评价，影响了表达的自然性和积极性。建议避免使用负面词汇，直接表达喜欢与朋友聊天的原因，并提供具体细节。

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me share my thoughts about my studies, fashion, and interesting things I find online.

提案: 回答较为重复，缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，同时丰富细节。

例: I usually chat about various topics, such as my studies, fashion, and interesting things I find online. For instance, last night I discussed with my best friend June how to brew a tasty coffee.

提案: 回答不够清晰，表达含糊且有语法错误。建议明确表达偏好，使用连贯句子，并避免口头语。

例: I don't have a strong preference; I enjoy chatting both with a group and with one friend because each has its own fun and meaningful moments.

提案: 回答中有较多口头语，影响流畅性。建议减少口头语，使用更自然的表达，并适当扩展理由。

例: I don't have a strong preference because I enjoy talking with people either face-to-face or through social media. However, face-to-face communication allows me to see facial expressions, which makes conversations more engaging.

提案: 回答表达基本清楚，但语法和用词有待改进。建议使用更准确的语法结构和词汇，使表达更自然。

例: I rarely argue with my friends because I try to stay positive. If a disagreement happens, I usually calm down first and try to resolve it, which often strengthens our friendship.

× I'm an ugly person and I want to share everything with my friends, such as about my studies, about my outfit and even something I think is interesting online.

✓ I'm a shy person and I want to share everything with my friends, such as my studies, my outfits and even things I find interesting online.

原句中使用了"an ugly person"，可能是表达错误，应该是"a shy person"（害羞的人）更符合语境。此外，"my outfit"应改为复数形式"my outfits"，因为通常会有多套衣服。"something I think is interesting online"应改为复数"things I find interesting online"，因为通常有多件有趣的事情。

× Everything I just like talk with my friends, such as my studies and my outfit or something I find interesting online.

✓ Everything, I just like talking with my friends, such as my studies, my outfits or things I find interesting online.

"my outfit"应改为复数"my outfits"，因为通常有多套衣服。"something I find interesting online"应改为复数"things I find interesting online"，表示多件事物。

× Everything I just like talk with my friends, such as my studies and my outfit or something I find interesting online.

✓ Everything, I just like talking with my friends, such as my studies, my outfits or things I find interesting online.

动词"like"后面应接动名词形式，故"like talk"应改为"like talking"。

× Such as I'm having fun chatting with you now, but last night I hung out with my friends and you feel.

✓ For example, I'm having fun chatting with you now, but last night I hung out with my friends and you know, it felt great.

句子结构不完整且表达不清晰，"Such as"用法不当，应改为"For example"。"and you feel"不完整，需补充完整表达。

× But uh, if we talk, uh, face to face, maybe I can see your expressions.

✓ But uh, if we talk, uh, face-to-face, maybe I can see your expressions.

"face to face"作为形容词或副词时应连字符连接，改为"face-to-face"。

× If there will be an argument between my friends and me, I will come down 1st and handle it well, making our friendship is stronger.

✓ If there is an argument between my friends and me, I will calm down first and handle it well, making our friendship stronger.

"come down"用法错误，应为"calm down"表示冷静下来。"making our friendship is stronger"中"is"多余，应改为"making our friendship stronger"。