Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Tapai ko uttar ma thap spashtata ra prabhavit shabda prayog garnu parcha. 'Uh' jasto filler shabda haru hataunu parcha ra sentence haru lai sajilo ra prabhavit banau. 5 vaakya bhitra prashna ko sidha uttar dinu parcha.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because I have many friends around me. I like sharing my values and thoughts with them, which helps me understand different perspectives.

提案: Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra shabda prayog ma sudhar garnu parcha. 'Uh' jasto filler shabda hataunu parcha ra sentence haru lai spasht ra prabhavit banau. Linking words prayog garera uttar lai coherent banaunu parcha.

例: I usually chat about current events in our society, especially financial matters. Since I am a management student, I believe financial knowledge is very important for everyone.

提案: Tapai ko uttar ma clarity ra grammar ma sudhar garnu parcha. 'You know' jasto filler shabda hataunu parcha ra sentence haru lai sajilo ra prabhavit banau. Linking words prayog garera uttar lai logical banaunu parcha.

例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows us to share different ideas and feelings. This way, we can learn from each other and become more knowledgeable.

提案: Tapai ko uttar ma informal shabda jasto ki 'wanna' ra 'you know' hataunu parcha. Spasht ra sajilo bhasha ma prashna ko sidha uttar dinu parcha. 5 vaakya bhitra prashna ko uttar dinu parcha.

例: I prefer to communicate via social media because it is more convenient for me. I feel more comfortable expressing myself online than in face-to-face conversations.

提案: Tapai ko uttar ma grammar ra shabda prayog ma sudhar garnu parcha. 'Yeah' ra 'you know' jasto informal shabda hataunu parcha. Sentence haru lai sajilo ra prabhavit banau.

例: Sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions. However, these arguments help us understand each other's perspectives better.

× I have many friends in my, uh, surroundings as I love to share, share my values, my thoughts with them.

✓ I have many friends in my surroundings as I love to share my values and my thoughts with them.

The phrase 'share, share my values' is repetitive and unnecessary. Also, 'surroundings' is correct as plural, but the comma before it is unnecessary. The sentence is corrected by removing repetition and the comma for clarity.

× I usually chat about what's are happening in our society, like about the financial things, uh, particularly as I'm a management student and financially, being financial, financially knowledge is very crucial to everyone.

✓ I usually chat about what is happening in our society, like financial matters, particularly as I'm a management student and financial knowledge is very crucial to everyone.

The phrase 'what's are happening' is incorrect; 'what is happening' is correct. 'Financial things' is vague; 'financial matters' is better. The phrase 'being financial, financially knowledge' is incorrect; 'financial knowledge' is the correct form.

× I prefer to chat with a group of people so that we can share our things and we should we become more like, you know, being more knowledgeable as many, we share many thoughts and feelings of every kind.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people so that we can share our ideas and become more knowledgeable, as we share many thoughts and feelings of every kind.

The phrase 'share our things' is vague; 'share our ideas' is clearer. The sentence had redundant words like 'we should we become more like, you know, being more knowledgeable' which is corrected to 'become more knowledgeable' for clarity and grammar.

× I don't wanna be face to face as I don't feel like being kind of person, you know?

✓ I don't want to be face to face as I don't feel like being that kind of person, you know?

The informal contraction 'wanna' should be 'want to' in formal speech. Also, 'being kind of person' is missing the article 'that' to specify the kind of person.

× Yeah, sometimes I argue with friends because sometimes we don't have a similar views and it becomes like, you know, arguable conversation.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I argue with friends because sometimes we don't have similar views and it becomes, you know, an arguable conversation.

The phrase 'a similar views' is incorrect because 'views' is plural and 'a' is singular. It should be 'similar views' without 'a'. Also, 'arguable conversation' is better preceded by 'an' because 'arguable' starts with a vowel sound.