Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be more natural by avoiding repetitive phrases like 'to reduce my stress and to make me feel happy'. Try to combine ideas smoothly and use more varied vocabulary.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and lifts my mood.

提案: Your answer has some grammatical errors and redundancy, such as 'chat with my friends that to discuss' and 'discuss about'. Try to use correct prepositions and structure your sentences clearly. Also, use linking words to connect ideas.

例: I usually chat with my friends to discuss our class assignments, plan parties, and talk about our plans for the upcoming weekends.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical mistakes like 'group of people's' and awkward phrasing. Also, the sentence is a bit long and unclear. Try to use correct possessive forms and clearer sentence structure with linking words.

例: I prefer chatting in a group. We have a group on Instagram where we joke around and also collaborate on our project work.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and grammatically incorrect. Avoid phrases like 'I do both of things' and 'communicate with the face to face'. Use simpler and correct expressions and link your ideas coherently.

例: I like both communicating face-to-face and chatting with my friends on social media, depending on the situation.

提案: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by using plural form 'opinions' and adding linking words to explain more. Also, avoid repeating 'Sir' as it is unnecessary in this context.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions on various topics, but we always try to understand each other.

× I really like chatting with my friends, it helps me to reduce my stress and to make me feel happy.

✓ I really like chatting with my friends; it helps me reduce my stress and makes me feel happy.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'to' before 'reduce' and 'make'. In English, after verbs like 'helps', the base form of the verb is used without 'to'. Also, the sentence is a run-on; it should be separated properly with a semicolon or period.

× I usually chat with my friends that to discuss something for our class or to discuss about parties and to what we are doing on our next weekends.

✓ I usually chat with my friends to discuss something for our class, parties, and what we are doing on the next weekend.

The phrase 'that to discuss' is incorrect; 'to discuss' should directly follow 'chat'. Also, 'discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not require 'about'. 'Next weekends' should be singular 'next weekend' as it refers to a specific upcoming time.

× I prefer to chat in a group of people's.

✓ I prefer to chat in a group of people.

The word 'people's' is possessive and incorrect here. The correct plural form is 'people' without an apostrophe.

× We have a group on Instagram of our friends and WeChat on that group and roast each other and do some work for our projects.

✓ We have a group of our friends on Instagram and WeChat, where we roast each other and do some work for our projects.

The sentence structure is awkward. 'WeChat on that group' is unclear; it should be 'a group on WeChat'. Also, the sentence needs proper conjunctions and commas for clarity.

× I do both of things that I chat on social media with my friends and I communicate with the face to face also.

✓ I do both things: I chat with my friends on social media and also communicate face-to-face.

'Both of things' is incorrect; it should be 'both things'. 'Chat on social media' is better as 'chat with friends on social media'. 'Communicate with the face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'communicate face-to-face'.

× I argue with my friends especially when we have different opinion on various topics.

✓ I argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions on various topics.

'Different opinion' should be plural 'different opinions' because it refers to multiple views. Also, a comma is needed before 'especially' for correct sentence flow.