Part 1
試験官
Do you like chatting with friends?
受験者
Yes, I like chatting with my friends very much. For example, when I was upset they always told me some really funny things to cheer me up and I would feel more relaxed. It's a really a good way to relax me.
試験官
What do you usually chat about with friends?
受験者
I usually check about my friends with some happy things because I think chatting with my friends is a really relaxed way, so they relax me and I will relax them too. Friends need help each other.
試験官
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
受験者
I prefer to chat with a group of people. I really like to sharing things in public because it's a really good way to practice my talking skills and I can have a lot of friends too to make a good impression.
試験官
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
受験者
I prefer to communicate via social media because sometimes communicate face to face is will make me feel embarrassed and maybe the whole communication will be embarrassing so I prefer the second one.
試験官
Do you argue with friends?
受験者
Of course, in friendship, argument is part of friendship. I think just have more arguments with your friends. You will know each other more deeply. So I will argue with my friends.
Do you like chatting with friends?
スコア: 70.0提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢和朋友聊天的情感,但语言有些重复且不够自然。建议避免重复表达“relax”,并且句子结构可以更简洁流畅。
例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because they always cheer me up when I'm feeling down by sharing funny stories, which helps me feel better.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用更准确的表达方式,并且避免重复“relax”。可以具体说明聊天内容。
例: I usually talk about happy events or interesting experiences with my friends because it helps us both feel relaxed and supported.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答表达了观点,但语法错误影响了表达效果。建议注意动词形式和句子结构,使表达更自然。
例: I prefer chatting with a group because it allows me to practice my speaking skills and meet more people, which helps me make a good impression.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构,避免重复“embarrassed”,并用更自然的表达方式。
例: I prefer communicating through social media because face-to-face conversations sometimes make me feel shy or uncomfortable.
Do you argue with friends?
スコア: 70.0提案: 回答表达了观点,但句子结构不够自然,且有语法错误。建议使用更连贯的句子,并用更准确的词汇表达。
例: Yes, I believe arguments are a natural part of friendship because they help us understand each other better.
× I really like to sharing things in public because it's a really good way to practice my talking skills and I can have a lot of friends too to make a good impression.
✓ I really like sharing things in public because it's a really good way to practice my talking skills and I can have a lot of friends too to make a good impression.
动词like后面接动名词(-ing形式)而不是不定式。这里应使用sharing而不是to sharing。
× I usually check about my friends with some happy things because I think chatting with my friends is a really relaxed way, so they relax me and I will relax them too.
✓ I usually check on my friends with some happy things because I think chatting with my friends is a really relaxed way, so they relax me and I will relax them too.
动词check后面搭配介词on表示“关心、查看”,而不是about。应使用check on my friends。
× Friends need help each other.
✓ Friends need to help each other.
短语help each other前应加不定式to,且each other表示互相,不能单独用help each other作谓语。
× sometimes communicate face to face is will make me feel embarrassed and maybe the whole communication will be embarrassing so I prefer the second one.
✓ sometimes communicating face to face will make me feel embarrassed and maybe the whole communication will be embarrassing so I prefer the second one.
这里should用动名词communicating代替不定式,且will不应和is连用。
× I think just have more arguments with your friends.
✓ I think you should just have more arguments with your friends.
句子缺少主语和助动词,导致结构不完整,应补充you should使句子完整。