Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意时态和词汇的正确使用，同时避免冗长和重复。可以尝试用更自然的表达方式来说明不同情境下的聊天习惯。

例: I like chatting with my friends when I feel sad because it helps me relax. However, when I am studying, I prefer not to chat as it wastes my time.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清，建议完整回答问题并使用连贯的句子。同时，注意词汇的准确性和句子结构的完整性。

例: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives and interests. I believe a true friend is someone who understands you deeply, so I don't need to talk to them all the time.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，建议练习正确的句子结构和词汇使用。同时，可以更具体地说明为什么喜欢一对一聊天。

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I feel more comfortable and can have deeper conversations. Talking in a group makes me anxious.

提案: 回答表达不清晰且有语法错误，建议简化句子并使用正确的表达方式。可以具体说明面对面交流的优点。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more sincere. I can see the person's expressions and learn from their experiences, which helps me understand topics better.

提案: 回答中存在语法和词汇错误，且表达不清楚。建议使用正确的句子结构，明确表达观点，并避免重复。

例: Yes, I do argue with my friends sometimes. I believe that arguing helps us understand each other better and improves our relationship in the long term.

× I think it depends on the situation such as when I feel sad I usually chat with my friend to make me relax but when I study I usually don't like treat with my friend because I think it's waste might my time.

✓ I think it depends on the situation, such as when I feel sad I usually chat with my friends to make me relax, but when I study I usually don't like to hang out with my friends because I think it's a waste of my time.

这里“friend”应使用复数形式“friends”，因为通常我们和多个朋友聊天。还有“treat with my friend”表达不正确，应该用“hang out with my friends”表示和朋友一起玩。最后“waste might my time”应为“a waste of my time”，表示浪费时间。

× I trade with my friend 2 * a week.

✓ I chat with my friends twice a week.

“trade”用错了，应该是“chat”表示聊天；“friend”应为复数“friends”，因为通常是和多个朋友聊天；“2 * a week”应改为“twice a week”，表示每周两次。

× I think a truly friend isn't someone you chat with all the time, but one who resonate with you specially.

✓ I think a true friend isn't someone you chat with all the time, but one who resonates with you especially.

“truly”是副词，修饰动词或形容词，这里应使用形容词“true”修饰名词“friend”。“resonate”动词需加第三人称单数形式“resonates”，因为主语是“one”。“specially”应为“especially”，表示特别。

× So I don't usually talk with my friends, I just talk with them when I.

✓ So I don't usually talk with my friends; I just talk with them when I want to.

句子缺少谓语动词，导致结构不完整。应补充完整的谓语“want to”，使句子完整通顺。

× I perform to chat with only one.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one person.

“perform”用错，应为“prefer”，表示偏好。

× To be honest I'm a social anxiety so I afraid talk with group and I think talk with only one can get to know people deeply and improve topic in depth.

✓ To be honest, I have social anxiety, so I am afraid to talk with groups, and I think talking with only one person can help me get to know people deeply and improve topics in depth.

“I'm a social anxiety”表达错误，应为“I have social anxiety”。“I afraid talk”缺少助动词，应为“I am afraid to talk”。“talk with group”应为“talk with groups”。“improve topic”应为“improve topics”。

× I perform 2 community face to face, I mean that will feel more sincere.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication; I mean it feels more sincere.

“perform”应为“prefer”。“2 community face to face”表达不清，应改为“face-to-face communication”。“that will feel”主语不明确，应改为“it feels”。

× It let me see the chance in person's eyes and the mature experiences which is very useful for me.

✓ It lets me see the chance in a person's eyes and the mature experiences which are very useful for me.

“let”应为第三人称单数“lets”，因为主语是“It”。“person's eyes”前应加不定冠词“a”。“experiences”是复数，谓语动词应为“are”。

× And I think community face to face can get the knowledge people and explore topic in depth.

✓ And I think face-to-face communication can help me gain knowledge from people and explore topics in depth.

“community face to face”表达不正确，应为“face-to-face communication”。“get the knowledge people”表达不通，应改为“gain knowledge from people”。“explore topic”应为复数“topics”。

× Yes I do. I think argue with other which help us understand each other bit which make it easily for us to get along with in long range.

✓ Yes, I do. I think arguing with others helps us understand each other a bit, which makes it easier for us to get along in the long run.

“argue”应改为动名词“arguing”作主语。“other”应为复数“others”。“help”应为第三人称单数“helps”，因为主语是“arguing”。“bit”前应加不定冠词“a”。“make it easily”应为“makes it easier”。“in long range”应为“in the long run”。

× And I think argue with friends can can get technology.

✓ And I think arguing with friends can help us gain skills.

“argue”应为动名词“arguing”。“can can”重复，应删去一个“can”。“get technology”表达不当，应改为“help us gain skills”或“help us learn new things”。