Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子较长且有些重复。建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致和单复数形式，同时避免冗余。

例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps us share our interests and build strong relationships.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免重复表达，并且逻辑要清晰。

例: I usually talk with my friends about my daily life. Sometimes, when I feel depressed, they encourage me to overcome difficulties.

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法和表达有较多错误，建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because it is easier to understand each other's feelings. In contrast, group chats can be complicated.

提案: 表达中有语法错误和用词不当，建议注意句子结构和词汇选择，清晰表达对比，并使用连接词。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because body language and facial expressions help us understand each other better. Social media lacks these emotional cues.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议使用正确的冠词和复数形式，句子结构要完整，表达要具体且连贯。

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when we have different opinions. For example, during a discussion about our research topic, we shared and supported our personal views.

× I'm very fascinated by chatting with my friends because it's a good way to express ourself and know something interests of each other and we can build a firm relationship through it.

✓ I'm very fascinated by chatting with my friends because it's a good way to express ourselves and know each other's interests, and we can build a firm relationship through it.

The pronoun 'ourself' is incorrect; the correct reflexive pronoun for 'our' is 'ourselves'. Also, 'something interests of each other' is incorrect; it should be 'each other's interests' to show possession correctly.

× I usually chat about with my friends to share my moments about my daily life and what's more, sometimes I have in depression and have depression about something so they gave me encourage to defend with the difficulties.

✓ I usually chat with my friends to share moments from my daily life, and what's more, sometimes I feel depressed about something, so they encourage me to deal with the difficulties.

The phrase 'chat about with my friends' is incorrect; 'chat with my friends' is correct. 'Have in depression' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'feel depressed'. 'Gave me encourage' should be 'encourage me'. 'Defend with the difficulties' is incorrect; 'deal with the difficulties' is appropriate.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think one friends can get better understanding of your feeling or so on.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think one friend can get a better understanding of your feelings or so on.

The phrase 'one friends' is incorrect because 'one' is singular and 'friends' is plural; it should be 'one friend'. Also, 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to match the context.

× On the contrast or group of people, I think there are many relationship to be. Held, so it's also.

✓ In contrast, when chatting with a group of people, I think there are many relationships to be maintained, so it's also important.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'On the contrast or group of people' is incorrect; 'In contrast, when chatting with a group of people' is clearer. 'There are many relationship to be. Held' is grammatically incorrect and fragmented; it should be 'there are many relationships to be maintained'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face. I think face to face, the communications can get better understandings with your bodies, with your gestures and what's happening in your face. But through the social media it has any emotion about that.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face. I think face-to-face communication allows better understanding through body language, gestures, and facial expressions. But through social media, there is less emotion conveyed.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. 'The communications can get better understandings with your bodies' is awkward; 'communication allows better understanding through body language' is clearer. 'It has any emotion about that' is incorrect; 'there is less emotion conveyed' is appropriate.

× Yes, I occasionally argue with my friends, especially we have an different opinions on things.

✓ Yes, I occasionally argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions on things.

'An different opinions' is incorrect because 'different' starts with a consonant sound and 'opinions' is plural; the article 'an' should be omitted. Also, 'especially we have' is awkward; 'especially when we have' is correct.

× For example, I still remember when we talk about a research about our topic of the process, we have a different opinions.

✓ For example, I still remember when we talked about research on our topic of the process, we had different opinions.

'A research' is incorrect because 'research' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. 'A different opinions' is incorrect because 'opinions' is plural; it should be 'different opinions'. Also, tense should be past ('talked', 'had') to match 'I still remember'.

× We should argue with our personal opinions to support.

✓ We should support our arguments with our personal opinions.

The original sentence is awkward and incomplete. 'Argue with our personal opinions to support' is unclear. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning: supporting arguments with personal opinions.