Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子较长且有些重复。建议简化句子结构，注意主谓一致和单复数形式，使用更自然的表达。

例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps us share our interests and build strong relationships.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免重复，表达情感时用更自然的方式。

例: I usually talk with my friends about my daily life. Sometimes when I feel down, they encourage me to overcome difficulties.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整且不连贯。建议使用完整句子，清晰表达观点，并用连接词使句子流畅。

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because they can understand my feelings better. In contrast, group chats can be more complicated.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不准确，句子结构不够自然。建议简化句子，使用正确的表达方式描述面部表情和肢体语言的重要性。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because body language and facial expressions help us understand each other better, which is missing in social media.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，避免重复，表达观点时更具体。

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when we have different opinions. For example, during a discussion about our research topic, we shared and defended our personal views.

× I'm very fascinated by chatting with my friends because it's a good way to express ourself and know something interests of each other and we can build a firm relationship through it.

✓ I'm very fascinated by chatting with my friends because it's a good way to express ourselves and know each other's interests, and we can build a firm relationship through it.

The pronoun 'ourself' is incorrect; the correct reflexive pronoun for 'our' is 'ourselves'. Also, 'something interests of each other' is incorrect; it should be 'each other's interests' to show possession and plural form.

× I usually chat about with my friends to share my moments about my daily life and what's more, sometimes I have in depression and have depression about something so they gave me encourage to defend with the difficulties.

✓ I usually chat with my friends to share moments from my daily life, and what's more, sometimes I feel depressed about something, so they encourage me to deal with the difficulties.

The phrase 'chat about with my friends' is incorrect; 'chat with my friends' is correct. 'Have in depression' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'feel depressed'. 'Gave me encourage' should be 'encourage me'. 'Defend with the difficulties' is incorrect; 'deal with the difficulties' is appropriate.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think one friends can get better understanding of your feeling or so on.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think one friend can get a better understanding of your feelings and so on.

The word 'friends' should be singular 'friend' to match 'one'. 'Feeling' should be plural 'feelings' to refer to general emotions. Also, 'a better understanding' requires the article 'a'.

× On the contrast or group of people, I think there are many relationship to be. Held, so it's also.

✓ In contrast, when chatting with a group of people, I think there are many relationships to be built, so it's also good.

The phrase 'On the contrast or group of people' is incorrect; 'In contrast, when chatting with a group of people' is correct. 'Many relationship to be. Held' is fragmented and incorrect; it should be 'many relationships to be built'. The sentence was incomplete and needed restructuring.

× I prefer to communicate face to face. I think face to face, the communications can get better understandings with your bodies, with your gestures and what's happening in your face. But through the social media it has any emotion about that.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face. I think face-to-face communication allows better understanding through body language, gestures, and facial expressions. But through social media, there is less emotion conveyed.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. 'The communications can get better understandings with your bodies' is awkward; 'communication allows better understanding through body language' is clearer. 'What's happening in your face' should be 'facial expressions'. 'It has any emotion about that' is incorrect; 'there is less emotion conveyed' is appropriate.

× Yes, I occasionally argue with my friends, especially we have an different opinions on things.

✓ Yes, I occasionally argue with my friends, especially when we have different opinions on things.

The article 'an' before 'different' is incorrect because 'different' starts with a consonant sound; no article is needed here. Also, the sentence is missing 'when' to connect the clauses properly.

× For example, I still remember when we talk about a research about our topic of the process, we have a different opinions.

✓ For example, I still remember when we talked about research on our topic of the process, we had different opinions.

'A research' is incorrect; 'research' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. 'A different opinions' is incorrect; 'different opinions' is plural without an article. Also, tense should be past 'talked' and 'had' to match the context.

× We should argue with our personal opinions to support.

✓ We should support our arguments with our personal opinions.

The original sentence is awkward and incomplete. 'Argue with our personal opinions to support' is unclear. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning and corrects sentence structure.