Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid redundancy by combining ideas smoothly and adding a bit more detail to make your answer more natural and effective.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, especially after classes and during the weekend when we have more free time.

提案: Make sure your sentences are complete and use linking words to connect ideas clearly. Also, be specific and avoid small grammar mistakes.

例: Usually, we chat about what we learned in class and our hobbies; for example, I enjoy playing table tennis.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by explaining why you prefer chatting with a small group to add more content and coherence.

例: I prefer chatting with two or three friends because it’s easier to have a meaningful conversation without too much noise.

提案: Work on grammar and sentence structure, and use linking words to make your answer more natural and fluent.

例: I prefer communicating face-to-face rather than through social media because it feels more comfortable and personal.

提案: Improve grammar and clarity by using correct verb tenses and explaining your opinion more clearly with linking words.

例: Yes, of course. When we have different opinions, we sometimes argue to understand each other better.

× Usually we chat about. What we take in the class and our hobbies, for example like table tennis.

✓ Usually we chat about what we learn in class and our hobbies, for example, table tennis.

The original sentence has an incorrect sentence structure with an unnecessary period and awkward phrasing. 'What we take in the class' is incorrect; it should be 'what we learn in class'. Also, 'for example like table tennis' is redundant; 'for example, table tennis' is sufficient. To improve, remove the period after 'about' and restructure the sentence for clarity.

× Yes, of course, if we had a different opinions, we should argue.

✓ Yes, of course, if we have different opinions, we should argue.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'had' and the modal verb 'should' in this context. Since the situation is general and present, 'have' is appropriate. Also, 'opinions' is plural, so 'different opinions' is correct without 'a'. The modal verb 'should' is acceptable here to express obligation or recommendation.

× if we had a different opinions, we should argue.

✓ if we have different opinions, we should argue.

The phrase 'a different opinions' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'opinions'. The correct form is 'different opinions' without 'a' because 'opinions' is plural.

× I don't like to communicate with social media, I prefer to communicate with my friends face to face because it's make it more comfortable.

✓ I don't like to communicate via social media; I prefer to communicate with my friends face to face because it makes it more comfortable.

The phrase 'communicate with social media' is incorrect; 'communicate via social media' is correct. Also, 'it's make it' is grammatically wrong; it should be 'it makes it' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. The sentence also needs proper punctuation to separate independent clauses.