Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lặp từ. Bạn nên nói rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn, ví dụ như sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn đúng cách và tránh dùng từ không chính xác như 'chat' thay vì 'chatting'.

例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it allows me to interact with them and share stories about our daily lives.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'my stories' và 'my daily lives'. Hãy sử dụng các từ vựng phong phú hơn và cấu trúc câu mạch lạc hơn.

例: I usually talk about my daily activities, hobbies, or interesting experiences that are relevant to the conversation.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh những phần không liên quan hoặc không rõ nghĩa.

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because it is easier to have a confident and smooth conversation.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và cấu trúc câu tự nhiên hơn. Tránh dùng từ không đúng như 'refer to communicate'.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face with my friends because it helps me feel more confident and have smoother conversations.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên nói rõ ràng, sử dụng từ đúng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends when we have problems, but we always solve them and continue to communicate well.

× Yes, I do like chat with my friend.

✓ Yes, I do like chatting with my friends.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'chatting' instead of the base form 'chat'. Also, 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context of chatting with multiple people.

× When I chat with my friend I can interact with them and talk some stories about their daily lives.

✓ When I chat with my friends, I can interact with them and talk about some stories about their daily lives.

The singular 'friend' conflicts with the plural pronoun 'them'; it should be plural 'friends' to agree. Also, 'talk some stories' is incorrect; it should be 'talk about some stories'.

× I usually tell them about my stories or my favorite thing that I love to do every day, my daily lives or something that is suitable for the conversation.

✓ I usually tell them about my stories or my favorite things that I love to do every day, my daily life, or something that is suitable for the conversation.

'Thing' should be plural 'things' to match the plural context. 'Daily lives' is incorrect when referring to oneself; it should be 'daily life'.

× I refer to chat with one friend and other group of friends because when I chat with one friend, I could easily be confidently and start a conversation smoothly and easy to suit them.

✓ I prefer to chat with one friend or a group of friends because when I chat with one friend, I can be confident and start a conversation smoothly and easily to suit them.

'Refer to' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to'. 'And' should be 'or' to indicate choice. 'Could easily be confidently' is incorrect; it should be 'can be confident'. 'Easy' should be the adverb 'easily'.

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✓ [This sentence is incomplete and unclear, so it should be removed or clarified.]

The sentence is incomplete and does not convey a clear meaning; it should be removed or rewritten for clarity.

× I refer to communicate with my friends outside because when talking with my friends outside, I could easily be confident and start a conversation smoothly.

✓ I prefer to communicate with my friends face-to-face because when talking with my friends in person, I can be confident and start a conversation smoothly.

'Refer to' should be 'prefer to'. 'Outside' is vague; 'face-to-face' or 'in person' is clearer. 'Could' should be 'can' to express ability.

× Yes, sometime I do a girl with my friend with some problem that I have made with my friend, but the result is very good.

✓ Yes, sometimes I have a disagreement with my friend about some problems that I have caused, but the result is very good.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Do a girl' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'have a disagreement'. 'Problem' should be plural 'problems'.

× We actually solve the problem and start start to communicate again and again.

✓ We actually solved the problem and started to communicate again and again.

The verbs should be in past tense 'solved' and 'started' to match the past action. Also, 'start' is repeated twice; one should be removed.