Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid repetition and grammatical errors. Use clear and natural sentences, and provide specific reasons with linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me feel happier and less stressed. Moreover, talking with them allows me to share and learn different experiences about daily life.

提案: Make your sentences more concise and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific examples.

例: We usually talk about daily affairs, such as our work, careers, and interesting incidents that happened to each of us recently.

提案: Avoid confusing sentence structures and repetition. Use clear linking words to explain your preference logically.

例: Honestly, I prefer chatting with just one friend because it is easier to focus on the conversation, and I can follow up on everything we discuss more effectively.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more natural expressions and linking words to explain reasons.

例: Of course, I prefer face-to-face conversations because on social media, it's hard to understand people's true intentions or see their body language, which can lead to misunderstandings.

提案: Work on grammar and sentence clarity. Use simpler and more natural expressions to explain your ideas clearly.

例: In my opinion, everyone sometimes argues with people they have relationships with. I have had some arguments with my friends, but we always manage to resolve them and maintain our friendship.

× Yes, I really love chatting with my friends because it's it's help.

✓ Yes, I really love chatting with my friends because it helps.

The phrase 'it's it's help' is incorrect. The correct form is 'it helps' where 'helps' is the third person singular present tense verb agreeing with the subject 'it'. The repetition 'it's it's' is a mistake and should be removed.

× Also talking with friends can beneficial can be beneficial in order to transfer different experiences about daily life.

✓ Also, talking with friends can be beneficial in order to share different experiences about daily life.

The phrase 'can beneficial' is incorrect because 'beneficial' is an adjective and needs the verb 'be' to form 'can be beneficial'. Also, 'transfer' is not the correct verb here; 'share' is more appropriate when talking about experiences.

× We usually talk about daily affairs and share our experiences, about our works, our careers and the incidences that happened to everyone of ourselves, everyone of us.

✓ We usually talk about daily affairs and share our experiences, about our work, our careers, and the incidents that happened to each of us.

The word 'works' is incorrect in this context; 'work' is uncountable when referring to one's job or tasks. 'Incidences' should be 'incidents' which is the correct plural form for events. Also, 'everyone of ourselves' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'each of us'.

× Honestly, we prefer to chat with just one of my friends because in that case I find it easier to focus on our conversation and I can and therefore I can follow up everything that's is related to our conversation later.

✓ Honestly, I prefer to chat with just one of my friends because in that case I find it easier to focus on our conversation and therefore I can follow up on everything that is related to our conversation later.

The subject 'I' does not agree with 'we prefer'; it should be 'I prefer'. The phrase 'that's is' is incorrect; it should be 'that is'. Also, 'follow up' needs the preposition 'on' to be correct.

× Of course my preference is face to face conversation because in the social media chat we cannot recognize peoples real purposes or their body language or their postures and it can lead to many mistakes.

✓ Of course, my preference is face-to-face conversation because in social media chats we cannot recognize people's real intentions or their body language or their postures, and it can lead to many mistakes.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. 'In the social media chat' is better as 'in social media chats' to generalize. 'Peoples' should be 'people's' to show possession. 'Purposes' is better replaced with 'intentions' for clarity.

× Generally, in my opinion, everyone has different argues with people that he really have have any relationship with them.

✓ Generally, in my opinion, everyone has different arguments with people with whom they really have a relationship.

'Argues' is a verb, but here a noun 'arguments' is needed. The phrase 'that he really have have any relationship with them' is incorrect; it should be 'with whom they really have a relationship'. Also, 'have have' is a repetition error.

× Of course I had various argues with my friends, but our art of relationship is where we could fix it.

✓ Of course, I have had various arguments with my friends, but the art of our relationship is that we could fix it.

'Argues' should be 'arguments' as a noun. 'Had' is past tense but 'have had' is more appropriate for experiences up to now. 'Art of relationship' should be 'art of our relationship'. The phrase 'is where we could fix it' is awkward; 'is that we could fix it' is better.