Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'I like chatting with my friends because it makes me happy. We share our emotions, reels, and stories, which makes me feel comfortable and entertained.' Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

例: I like chatting with my friends because it makes me happy. We share our emotions and interesting stories, which keeps me entertained and comfortable.

提案: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, say 'I usually chat with my friends about my career plans, trips, and future programs. Recently, we discussed the send-off party at our college, sharing our experiences and reviewing the event, which made me very happy.'

例: I usually chat with my friends about my career plans, trips, and future programs. Recently, we discussed the send-off party at our college, sharing our experiences and reviewing the event, which made me very happy.

提案: Work on grammar and sentence structure, and avoid filler words. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, say 'I prefer chatting with a group of friends because it helps us improve communication and share memories and different perspectives. In contrast, chatting with one person can sometimes feel one-sided.'

例: I prefer chatting with a group of friends because it helps us improve communication and share memories and different perspectives. In contrast, chatting with one person can sometimes feel one-sided.

提案: Avoid repetition and filler words. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly. For example, say 'I prefer face-to-face communication because, unlike social media, it allows me to see facial expressions and emotions, which makes me feel happier.'

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because, unlike social media, it allows me to see facial expressions and emotions, which makes me feel happier.

提案: Try to avoid filler words and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to explain your opinion. For example, say 'Yes, I do argue with my friends when I believe they are mistaken. I think arguing is a good behavior because it helps us improve ourselves.'

例: Yes, I do argue with my friends when I believe they are mistaken. I think arguing is a good behavior because it helps us improve ourselves.

× Yeah I like to chatting with my friends because it make me more happy we share our emotions through chatting and we also share reels and stories that make me more comfortable and entertainment and.

✓ Yeah I like chatting with my friends because it makes me happier. We share our emotions through chatting and we also share reels and stories that make me more comfortable and entertained.

The phrase 'like to chatting' is incorrect; after 'like', the verb should be in the '-ing' form without 'to'. Also, 'it make me more happy' should be 'it makes me happier' to agree with the singular subject and use the comparative form of the adjective. Additionally, 'entertainment and' is incomplete; 'entertained' is the correct adjective here.

× Yeah I like to chatting with my friends because it make me more happy we share our emotions through chatting and we also share reels and stories that make me more comfortable and entertainment and.

✓ Yeah I like chatting with my friends because it makes me happier. We share our emotions through chatting and we also share reels and stories that make me more comfortable and entertained.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Subject-verb agreement is essential for grammatical correctness.

× At last time we chat about the, uh, send off party that happened in our college, uh, and the experiences and the events and the review about the program.

✓ Last time we chatted about the send-off party that happened in our college, and the experiences, the events, and the review of the program.

The phrase 'At last time we chat' is incorrect; 'last time' refers to a past event, so the verb should be in past tense 'chatted'. Also, 'send off' should be hyphenated as 'send-off'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Also we discussed and this make me uh, more happy.

✓ Also, we discussed, and this makes me happier.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'this'. Also, 'more happy' is better expressed as 'happier' for comparative form.

× I like to chat with group of friends because, uh, it helps us to, uh, improve our communications and share her memories and different perspective ideas from the, uh, other peoples while communicating to a single person.

✓ I like to chat with a group of friends because it helps us improve our communication and share our memories and different perspectives from other people while communicating with a single person.

The phrase 'group of friends' needs an article 'a'. 'Communications' should be singular 'communication' in this context. 'Her memories' is incorrect; it should be 'our memories'. 'Different perspective ideas' should be 'different perspectives'. 'Other peoples' is incorrect; 'people' is already plural. 'Communicating to' should be 'communicating with'.

× Uh, it's only a one way communication sometimes feel, uh, communicating with a group of people's sharing.

✓ It's only one-way communication sometimes; communicating with a group of people involves sharing.

'One way' should be hyphenated as 'one-way'. 'Group of people's sharing' is incorrect; it should be 'group of people involves sharing'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I prefer to communicate face to face communication because communicating through social media cannot identify the emotions or the face expressions, but communicating through face to face, we can identify the emotions of the person, the ideas of the person or, uh, it's make me more, uh, happy and.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because communicating through social media cannot identify emotions or facial expressions, but communicating face to face allows us to identify the person's emotions and ideas, which makes me happier.

'Face to face communication' should be 'face-to-face communication'. 'Face expressions' should be 'facial expressions'. 'Communicating through face to face' is incorrect; it should be 'communicating face to face'. 'It's make me more happy' should be 'which makes me happier'.

× Yeah, definitely. I argue with my friends if there is a fact in that, uh, because, uh, sometimes they are going to a wrong way.

✓ Yeah, definitely. I argue with my friends if there is a fact in that because sometimes they are going the wrong way.

The phrase 'going to a wrong way' is incorrect; it should be 'going the wrong way'. The modal verb 'are going' is acceptable here, but the preposition 'to' is unnecessary.

× I always argue about the, uh, right path and right way and, uh, it's a behavior for me.

✓ I always argue about the right path and right way, and it's a behavior for me.

The sentence is acceptable but could be clearer. 'It's a behavior for me' is vague; better to say 'It's a good behavior for me' or 'It's part of my behavior'.

× It's a good behavior arguing, uh, and it helps us to, uh, improve ourself.

✓ Arguing is a good behavior, and it helps us improve ourselves.

'Improve ourself' is incorrect; the reflexive pronoun should be plural 'ourselves' to agree with 'us'. Also, 'It's a good behavior arguing' is awkward; better to say 'Arguing is a good behavior'.