Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了喜欢与朋友聊天的原因，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和表达方式，使回答更流畅自然。

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me share my stress and recent experiences. Talking with them makes me feel relaxed and happy.

提案: 回答内容较为混乱，表达不清晰，存在语法错误和用词不当。建议使用更清晰的句子结构，明确表达聊天内容，并使用恰当的词汇。

例: We usually talk about various topics, such as things that happened to us, what made us feel confused or happy recently, and our expectations for the future. We enjoy open and free conversations without any limitations.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不准确，句子不连贯。建议使用简单明了的句子表达偏好，并说明原因。

例: I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group because it is easier to express my true feelings. In a group, it can be noisy and confusing.

提案: 回答中有许多语气词和不完整的句子，表达不够清晰。建议简化表达，明确说明偏好及原因，避免使用口语填充词。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can see the other person's emotions and expressions, which makes the conversation more meaningful and enjoyable.

提案: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰，句子结构混乱。建议用简单句表达观点，说明争吵的频率和处理方式。

例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends, but it doesn't happen often. When we do argue, we try to express our feelings honestly to understand each other better.

× Yes, I do really chatting with friends because it a kind of way to share my stress and the stories.

✓ Yes, I really like chatting with friends because it is a kind of way to share my stress and stories.

动词后面需要用动名词形式作宾语，'do really chatting'结构错误，应改为'I really like chatting'。

× Yes, I do really chatting with friends because it a kind of way to share my stress and the stories.

✓ Yes, I really like chatting with friends because it is a kind of way to share my stress and stories.

句中缺少系动词，'it a kind of way'应为'it is a kind of way'。

× Maybe that recently happens to me, to my friends and I will feel relaxable and happy after that.

✓ Maybe that recently happened to me, to my friends, and I felt relaxed and happy after that.

描述过去发生的事情时，动词应使用过去时，'happens'应为'happened'，'will feel'应为'felt'。

× We chat about all kind of topics that curse what happens to us and what made you feel confused.

✓ We chat about all kinds of topics that concern what happens to us and what makes us feel confused.

'all kind'应为复数形式'all kinds'，表示多种多样的主题。

× We chat about all kind of topics that curse what happens to us and what made you feel confused.

✓ We chat about all kinds of topics that concern what happens to us and what makes us feel confused.

'curse'用词错误，应为'verb + -ing'形式或动词原形，这里应为'concern'。

× We chat about all kind of topics that curse what happens to us and what made you feel confused.

✓ We chat about all kinds of topics that concern what happens to us and what makes us feel confused.

描述习惯性动作时，动词应使用一般现在时，'made'应为'makes'。

× We chat about all kind of topics that curse what happens to us and what made you feel confused.

✓ We chat about all kinds of topics that concern what happens to us and what makes us feel confused.

句中'you'应为'we'，保持主语一致。

× Very simply, what made you happy recently and nowadays?

✓ Very simply, what makes you happy recently and nowadays?

描述现在的情况应使用一般现在时，'made'应为'makes'。

× Very simply, what made you happy recently and nowadays?

✓ Very simply, what makes you happy recently and nowadays?

'you'应与说话者保持一致，若指自己应改为'I'或保持'you'视上下文。

× What is your appealing for something that will happen?

✓ What are you looking forward to that will happen?

'appealing'用法错误，应使用短语'looking forward to'表达期待。

× We talk about just about everything, the freedom topic, no limitation.

✓ We talk about just about everything, freedom topics, no limitations.

'topic'和'limitation'应使用复数形式，表示多种话题和限制。

× I have a preference to track only maybe with one people, one friend because I think if it's group of people it would be a mess and I can't really feel my true joy feeling about the things.

✓ I prefer to talk only with one person, one friend, because I think if it's a group of people it would be a mess and I can't really feel my true joy about things.

'people'是复数，单数应为'person'；'track'应为'talk'。

× if it's group of people it would be a mess

✓ if it's a group of people it would be a mess

'group'前缺少不定冠词'a'。

× I would like to choose one after people that are most stressed and share everything with them.

✓ I would like to choose one person who is most stressed and share everything with them.

'after people'用法错误，应为'one person who is'。

× I prefer to communicate face to face and in person since that, uh, when you're face to face to chatting with someone, you will say please or her emotion, umm, which can provide a very nice feeling to yourself or just, uh, you can feel it in person between.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face and in person because when you're face to face chatting with someone, you can see their emotions, which can provide a very nice feeling to yourself, or you can feel it in person.

'face to face to chatting'结构错误，应为'face to face chatting'；'say please or her emotion'表达不清，应为'see their emotions'。

× Yeah, of course as human we will argue with family members even though friends sometimes, but is do not really happen so oftenly.

✓ Yeah, of course as humans we sometimes argue with family members and friends, but it does not really happen so often.

'is do not'错误，应为'it does not'；'oftenly'不是正确副词，应为'often'。

× Yeah, of course as human we will argue with family members even though friends sometimes, but is do not really happen so oftenly.

✓ Yeah, of course as humans we sometimes argue with family members and friends, but it does not really happen so often.

'human'应为复数'humans'；'is'应为'it'。

× But sometimes when it already happens, I will just, uh, say the two things for friends, just showing each other feeling.

✓ But sometimes when it happens, I will just say two things to friends, just showing each other's feelings.

'already'位置不当，且表达不自然，去掉'already'更合适；'say the two things for friends'应为'say two things to friends'。