Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially my best friend named T. We usually talk when we have free time or during the weekends.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và tránh lặp từ. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, có cấu trúc tốt và sử dụng liên từ để làm câu mạch lạc hơn.

例: We usually chat about various topics such as shopping or going out together.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là số nhiều/số ít và cấu trúc câu. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và giải thích rõ lý do với các chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I have a few close friends whom I trust, and I feel more comfortable in one-on-one conversations.

提案: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp như chia động từ và hoàn thành câu. Bạn cũng nên thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face rather than via social media because it allows me to understand the other person's emotions better through their facial expressions and body language. For example, when talking in person, I can easily notice if someone is happy or upset.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích lý do cụ thể hơn.

例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because I don't always agree with their opinions, but we usually resolve our differences quickly.

× I like Justin with friend, especially my best friend, hers name is T and so, uh, we usually charge, uh, when uh, we have uh, times, uh, or at the weekends, umm, we just uh.

✓ I like chatting with friends, especially my best friend. Her name is T, and so, uh, we usually chat when we have time or at the weekends.

The phrase 'like Justin with friend' is incorrect; it should be 'like chatting with friends' to express the activity. 'Hers name' should be 'Her name' because 'her' is the correct possessive pronoun. 'Charge' is a wrong word choice; it should be 'chat'. Also, 'when we have times' should be 'when we have time' because 'time' is uncountable here.

× We usually charge about, uh, many uh, subjects like, uh, go shopping or uh, go out with my friend, uh.

✓ We usually chat about many subjects like going shopping or going out with my friends.

'Charge about' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'chat about'. Also, 'go shopping' and 'go out' should be in gerund form 'going shopping' and 'going out' after 'like'. 'My friend' should be plural 'my friends' to match 'many subjects' and general meaning.

× I prefer chat. I prefer to chat with only one friends because I don't want a chat with a group of people. Umm, I have uh, a little close friends I and I only trust with my close friends.

✓ I prefer to chat. I prefer to chat with only one friend because I don't want to chat with a group of people. Umm, I have a few close friends, and I only trust my close friends.

'Prefer chat' should be 'prefer to chat' because 'prefer' is followed by 'to' + verb. 'One friends' is incorrect; 'friend' should be singular. 'A little close friends' is incorrect; 'a few close friends' is correct for countable nouns. The phrase 'I and I only trust with my close friends' is ungrammatical; it should be 'and I only trust my close friends' without 'with'.

× I prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media because it allow me to understand the other person emotion better through their facial expression and body language.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media because it allows me to understand the other person's emotions better through their facial expressions and body language.

'It allow' should be 'it allows' because 'it' is third person singular and requires the verb to have an 's'. 'Other person emotion' should be 'other person's emotions' to show possession and plural form. 'Facial expression' should be plural 'facial expressions' to match 'body language'.

× For example, when talking in person, I can easily notice if someone is happy or.

✓ For example, when talking in person, I can easily notice if someone is happy or not.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'or' without completing the comparison. Adding 'not' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× Yes, sometime I argue with my friends because uh, sometimes I don't agree about her opinions, uh and uh, is she always uh.

✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because sometimes I don't agree with their opinions, and she is always...

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Don't agree about' should be 'don't agree with' because 'agree with' is the correct collocation. 'Her opinions' should be 'their opinions' to match 'my friends' plural. The phrase 'is she always' is incomplete and unclear; it should be rephrased or completed.