Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够自然流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的时态和表达方式。

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and spend quality time with them. It also allows us to understand each other better.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，部分内容不连贯。建议使用连贯的句子，明确表达主题，并避免语法错误。

例: As a student, I usually chat with my friends about our studies and assignments. For example, we discuss how to complete tasks and prepare for exams. Besides studying, we also talk about our daily lives to relax.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，使用正确的语法，并清楚表达观点。

例: Personally, I prefer chatting with one friend because it feels more relaxed and helps strengthen our friendship.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议使用更简洁的句子结构，明确表达观点，并注意语法正确。

例: It depends on the situation. If I am talking to someone I know well, it doesn't matter whether it's face-to-face or via social media. However, I personally prefer face-to-face communication.

提案: 回答中语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子，正确使用词汇，清楚表达观点。

例: Yes, I think arguing with friends is normal because it allows us to share different opinions and understand each other better.

× Chatting with my friends made me feel relax and it's a good way to spend spend time and we and we enjoy it.

✓ Chatting with my friends made me feel relaxed and it's a good way to spend time and we enjoy it.

这里'relax'应该用过去分词'relaxed'来表示感受状态，'spend spend'是重复错误，应去掉一个，'and we and we'重复，应去掉多余部分。

× It's made me feel more.

✓ It has made me feel better.

'feel more'表达不完整，应该用'feel better'表示感觉更好，且时态用现在完成时更合适。

× It's made me know each other better.

✓ It has made us know each other better.

'made me know each other'主语和宾语不匹配，应改为'made us know each other'，且时态用现在完成时更合适。

× usually chat with my friend about our studies and assignments that teachers give us.

✓ usually chat with my friends about our studies and assignments that teachers give us.

'friend'应为复数形式'friends'，因为后文提到的是复数的学习和作业。

× we often discuss how to complete tasks in officially and all sure TV's on preparing for exams.

✓ we often discuss how to complete tasks officially and also focus on preparing for exams.

'in officially'用法错误，应为'adverb'形式'offici ally'，且句子结构混乱，需调整使表达清晰。

× Besides study, we also talk about our daily life to relax after.

✓ Besides studying, we also talk about our daily lives to relax afterwards.

'study'应改为动名词'studying'，'daily life'应为复数'daily lives'，'after'应为副词'afterwards'。

× He personally I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think when you try chat with someone you're familiar with that you can feel more relaxed and stress your friendship friendship.

✓ Personally, I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think when you try to chat with someone you're familiar with, you can feel more relaxed and strengthen your friendship.

句首多余的'He'应去掉，'try chat'应为'try to chat'，'stress your friendship friendship'重复且用词错误，应为'strengthen your friendship'。

× It depends on situation.

✓ It depends on the situation.

'situation'前应加定冠词'the'，表示特定情况。

× if the person I talk with talk about is the someone I'm familiar with, I think it is doesn't matter face to face or social media so but personally I prefer to talk face to face.

✓ if the person I talk with is someone I'm familiar with, I think it doesn't matter whether face to face or social media, but personally I prefer to talk face to face.

'talk with talk about'重复且结构错误，应简化为'talk with'，'it is doesn't matter'语法错误，应为'it doesn't matter whether'，句子结构需调整使通顺。

× Yes, and I think argue with friends is a normal thing because in the arguments we can exchange others openings and is and it's made us to know each other better.

✓ Yes, and I think arguing with friends is a normal thing because in arguments we can exchange our opinions and it helps us to know each other better.

'argue'应改为动名词'arguing'，'others openings'应为'our opinions'，'is and it's made us to know'结构混乱，应改为'it helps us to know'。