Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but a bit repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to make your response more concise and clear by focusing on the main idea without repeating similar phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends, especially when the topic is interesting and we are in a comfortable place. It really depends on what we are discussing and where we are.

提案: Your answer has some hesitation and redundancy. Try to avoid filler words like 'MMM' and repeating phrases. Use linking words to organize your ideas and be more specific about your hobbies or plans.

例: We usually chat about our hobbies, skills, and upcoming plans, such as what we will do or where we will go the next day.

提案: Your answer is clear but has some grammatical errors and filler words. Try to avoid hesitation sounds like 'uh' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly.

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it makes us more comfortable. We can easily talk about any topic and share personal secrets, which is difficult in a group since it might become public.

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Avoid repeating words and use linking words to organize your ideas logically. Also, try to be more precise and avoid filler phrases.

例: I prefer both face-to-face communication and social media. For example, some friends live far away, so we connect online, but I enjoy meeting friends in person whenever possible.

提案: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Avoid repetition and incorrect word usage. Use linking words to explain your ideas clearly and provide specific reasons.

例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because it helps us understand each other better and strengthens our friendship.

× Yeah, I like chatting with friends, but it depends on the topic, what we are chatting about and what we are doing and where we are at chatting.

✓ Yeah, I like chatting with friends, but it depends on the topic, what we are chatting about, what we are doing, and where we are chatting.

The phrase 'where we are at chatting' is incorrect because 'at' is unnecessary and incorrect here. The verb 'chatting' is correctly used in the present participle form, but the preposition 'at' should be removed to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× We usually chat about the like our hobbies and our skills and our upcoming plans, what we will do tomorrow or where will we go tomorrow.

✓ We usually chat about our hobbies, our skills, our upcoming plans, what we will do tomorrow, or where we will go tomorrow.

The phrase 'the like our hobbies' is incorrect; 'the like' is unnecessary and incorrect here. Also, the question word order 'where will we go tomorrow' should be changed to statement order 'where we will go tomorrow' because it is part of a statement, not a question.

× I prefer to chat with the only one friend because it make uh us more comfortable and we can talk easily about any topic.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because it makes us more comfortable and we can talk easily about any topic.

The phrase 'the only one friend' is incorrect; 'only one friend' is the correct quantifier usage. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× I prefer to chat with the only one friend because it make uh us more comfortable and we can talk easily about any topic.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because it makes us more comfortable and we can talk easily about any topic.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it' in third person singular present tense.

× Like we can share our old personal secrets or anything we should share but in Group we can't share our personal things like it can be public.

✓ Like, we can share our old personal secrets or anything we should share, but in a group, we can't share our personal things because they can become public.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to 'personal things' which is plural; it should be 'they'. Also, 'Group' should be 'a group' with an article.

× I prefer both like I also want to communicate face to face or via social media.

✓ I prefer both; I also want to communicate face to face or via social media.

The phrase 'prefer both like' is awkward; adding a semicolon or period improves clarity. 'Face to face' is correct as a phrase without prepositions.

× Like some people in my group are that we can connect face to face.

✓ Like some people in my group are such that we can connect face to face.

The phrase 'are that' is incorrect; 'are such that' is the correct expression to indicate condition or situation.

× Like one of my friend lives in UK and one of my friend lives in India so we can't meet everyday so we are connected via social media but I really like to meet peace to face like which?

✓ Like one of my friends lives in the UK and one of my friends lives in India, so we can't meet every day; therefore, we are connected via social media, but I really like to meet face to face.

'One of my friend' should be 'one of my friends' because 'friends' is plural after 'one of'. 'UK' should have the definite article 'the'. 'Everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverb). 'Meet peace to face like which?' is incorrect and corrected to 'meet face to face'.

× Yeah, sometime I do argue with my friend because it makes her more connected and make her tropical interesting.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I do argue with my friend because it makes her more connected and makes her typically interested.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject. 'Tropical interesting' is incorrect; likely intended 'typically interested' or 'more interested'.

× Like we if we will argue so our relationship, friendship, friendship, relationship will become more stronger.

✓ If we argue, our relationship and friendship will become stronger.

The sentence is ungrammatical and redundant. 'If we will argue' should be 'If we argue' (present simple after 'if'). 'More stronger' is incorrect; 'stronger' alone suffices. Repetition of 'friendship, friendship, relationship' is unnecessary.