Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is natural and directly responds to the question, but it is very brief and lacks supporting details. To improve, try to add a reason or example to make your answer more informative and engaging.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and stay connected with them.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. To improve, use clear and correct sentences, provide specific topics you discuss, and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas.

例: We usually talk about our school homework and share personal experiences, such as how our day went or any interesting events.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but could be more structured and fluent. Use linking words and correct grammar to improve clarity. Also, explain why you prefer one-on-one conversations.

例: I prefer talking to my best friend because I feel more comfortable sharing my feelings, especially when I have a bad or good day.

提案: Your answer is somewhat clear but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. To improve, use correct sentence structures and linking words to contrast your preferences clearly.

例: If I'm feeling down, I prefer to talk face-to-face because it's more personal; otherwise, I usually communicate through texting.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear expressions. To improve, use correct grammar and explain the nature of your arguments more clearly with examples.

例: Yes, we sometimes argue, but it's usually playful and meant to have fun rather than serious disagreements.

× Like sharing me with each others and talk about school homeworks.

✓ Like sharing with each other and talking about school homework.

The phrase 'sharing me with each others' is incorrect because 'me' is not the correct pronoun here and 'each others' should be 'each other' without 's'. Also, 'talk' should be in the gerund form 'talking' to match the parallel structure. 'Homeworks' is incorrect as 'homework' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized.

× Like sharing me with each others and talk about school homeworks.

✓ Like sharing with each other and talking about school homework.

The word 'homeworks' is incorrect because 'homework' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. Use 'homework' instead.

× For me I prefer just talking to my best friend and tell him like if I have a bad day or a good day.

✓ For me, I prefer just talking to my best friend and telling him if I have a bad day or a good day.

The verb 'tell' should be in the gerund form 'telling' to maintain parallel structure with 'talking'. Also, 'like' is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity.

× For me I prefer just talking to my best friend and tell him like if I have a bad day or a good day.

✓ For me, I prefer just talking to my best friend and telling him if I have a bad day or a good day.

When two verbs are connected by 'and' after 'prefer', both should be in the same form. Here, 'talking' is gerund, so 'tell' should be 'telling' to be consistent.

× For me, like if I have a bad day or I'm feeling bad I'd like to talk face to face but if not I'll just text in each other.

✓ For me, if I have a bad day or I'm feeling bad, I'd like to talk face to face, but if not, I'll just text each other.

The phrase 'text in each other' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'text each other' without the preposition 'in'. Also, 'like' is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity.

× Of course we argue sometimes, but not for bad things, just about to having fun and a good time with each other.

✓ Of course we argue sometimes, but not about bad things, just about having fun and having a good time with each other.

The phrase 'just about to having fun' is incorrect. The correct form is 'just about having fun'. Also, 'not for bad things' should be 'not about bad things' to use the correct preposition.