Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer wa natural desu ga, 'the what's happening in society' no you na phrase wa fukuzatsu de, chotto fushizen ni kikoemasu. Motto seikaku de kantan na hyougen wo tsukatte kudasai. Mata, answer no nagasa wa yoi desu ga, motto specific na jyouhou wo kuwaeru to yoku narimasu.

例: Yes, I often enjoy talking with my friends. For example, we discuss our daily lives, hobbies, and current events in our community.

提案: Kono kotae wa fukuzatsu de, bunpou to imi ga wakari nikui desu. 'No way we talk about anything' wa fuhou na hyougen de, imi ga fumei desu. Motto seikaku de rikai shi yasui kotoba wo tsukatte kudasai. Mata, sentence no tsuzuki mo seikaku ni shite kudasai.

例: We usually talk about various topics, such as current events, the weather, and how we are doing at work or school.

提案: Kotae wa nagai desu ga, bunpou to imi ga fumei na tokoro ga arimasu. 'I prefer be people uh only with only one friend' wa seikaku ni tsutaerarenai node, motto kantan de meikaku ni shite kudasai. Mata, rikai shi yasui you ni setsuzoku kotoba wo tsukatte kudasai.

例: Actually, I prefer chatting with only one friend because in group discussions, I sometimes find it hard to communicate effectively.

提案: Kotae wa imi wa tsutawatteimasu ga, 'Eric communicate on face to Face better' no you na fuhou na hyougen ga arimasu. Motto seikaku de rikai shi yasui kotoba wo tsukatte kudasai. Mata, setsuzoku kotoba wo tsukatte hanashikata wo rikai shi yasuku shite kudasai.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because on social media, I cannot see facial expressions or understand how people feel.

提案: Kotae wa rikai dekimasu ga, 'I will eat. We will eat restaurants we argue' no you na bubun wa fumei de, bunpou mo machigatteimasu. Motto seikaku ni setsumei shite, rikai shi yasui kotoba wo tsukatte kudasai.

例: Not often, because I usually agree with my friends. However, sometimes we argue when choosing a restaurant to eat at.

× I talk about the daily life or my hobbies and also the what's happening in society.

✓ I talk about daily life or my hobbies and also what's happening in society.

In English, 'daily life' and 'what's happening in society' are general concepts and do not require the definite article 'the'. Using 'the' here is incorrect because it specifies something particular, which is not intended.

× No way we talk about anything.

✓ No, we talk about anything.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'No way' is an informal expression that does not fit here. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning by adding a comma and proper structure.

× For example, we I talk, I share the we share the opinion of what's happening in the society or current weather or their umm according performance.

✓ For example, when we talk, we share our opinions about what's happening in society, the current weather, or their performance.

The original sentence has mixed pronouns and unclear phrasing. 'We I talk' is incorrect; it should be 'when we talk'. Also, 'the opinion' should be 'our opinions' to match plural subject. 'In the society' should be 'in society' without 'the'. 'According performance' is unclear and corrected to 'their performance'.

× Actually, I prefer be people uh only with only one friend, because in the group discussion I feel some I sometimes feel that I do not know how to communicate with more effectively.

✓ Actually, I prefer to be with only one friend, because in group discussions I sometimes feel that I do not know how to communicate effectively with more people.

The phrase 'prefer be people uh only with only one friend' is incorrect. The correct form is 'prefer to be with only one friend'. Also, 'communicate with more effectively' is incomplete; it should be 'communicate effectively with more people'.

× Instead with that of that it is only one friend I can.

✓ Instead, with only one friend, I can communicate better.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction provides a complete and clear sentence structure.

× Eric communicate on face to Face better because we're using social media.

✓ I communicate face-to-face better because when we're using social media,

'Eric' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'I'. 'On face to Face' should be 'face-to-face'. The sentence is incomplete and corrected for clarity.

× I cannot see their facial expressions and I cannot know their what they are feeling about that.

✓ I cannot see their facial expressions and I cannot know how they are feeling about that.

The phrase 'their what they are feeling about that' is ungrammatical. It should be 'how they are feeling about that' to express the intended meaning.

× So I like it.

✓ So I prefer it.

'So I like it' is vague. 'So I prefer it' better expresses the preference for face-to-face communication.

× Not so often, because almost everything I can agree with my friend, and I don't think it's necessary to argue with them.

✓ Not very often, because I can agree with my friend on almost everything, and I don't think it's necessary to argue with them.

'Not so often' is less common; 'Not very often' is more natural. Also, 'almost everything I can agree with my friend' is awkward; it should be 'I can agree with my friend on almost everything'.

× But sometimes, especially when choosing a restaurant, I will eat. We will eat restaurants we argue.

✓ But sometimes, especially when choosing a restaurant, we argue about where to eat.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. The correction combines the ideas into a clear, grammatical sentence.